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The space ship with green and blue aliens crashed on mars. They decided to build a villiage and live away from the tirant of their old planet. || * Introduce your characters: The blue aliens started taking over slowly. They controlled the food rations, how much work the green aliens did, and what news they received. || * How will all your story and characters develop? The war starts. The green aliens eventually win because they are stronger from doing all the work while the blue aliens just sat around all day. || * Is your ending what your readers are expecting?
 * Describe the start of your story.
 * zvaleien- Turns into a leader of the group
 * atzaplena- stands up to zvaleien
 * Permondos- Smartest alien
 * What do they want?
 * Where are they going? ||
 * What happens in the middle of your story?
 * Plot Twists and Turns?
 * How will you lead up to the climax? ||
 * Outline the climax...How does the story end?
 * Have you used foreshadowing throughout your story ||

Mini Saga
The aliens blue aliens started attacking the green aliens. The blue aliens thought they were smarter and thought they were better. The aliens were throwing rocks at each other and hitting each other. Mean while an adult alien was playing a child alien at chess to raise his self esteem.

The aliens who landed on Quoliwg

by Kelsey Walker



Their space ship just crashed on a foreign planet called Quoliwg. The blue aliens emerged first, then the green aliens. The aliens were 6 feet tall and had three arms, two eyes, and 5 feet.They stood in shock looking at the big planet. A blue alien named Zvaleien who thought he was never wrong, spoke up and said, "We should build a village here, where the evil tyrant, Woieez, can never find us." Everyone agreed so they all got to work. Zvaleien and the other blue aliens supervised the work. The green aliens struggled to find supplies but eventually found enough wood and rocks to build a few houses. The aliens were all exhausted and decided to go to bed. The next day Zvaleien thought there should be some rules and the rest of the aliens agreed. They had a meeting to decide what the rules would be. They all decided on having 3 rules. RULE ONE: No eating other aliens RULE TWO: No skipping work RULE THREE: No stealing Zvaleien and the blue aliens made sure the green aliens got straight to work after the meeting. Half of the green aliens started constructing more buildings while the other green aliens started farming. Meanwhile the blue aliens sat around and talked about what they should do and how to divide rations. One of the green aliens Atzaplena asked "Why are we doing all the hard work while you and the other blue aliens are just sitting around and talking." "For many reasons actually", Eeblomg started, " We are smarter so therefore, we have to make all the plans. You green aliens are not as smart as us, so how would you know what plans will work?" Atzaplena got mad. "How do you know your smarter? How do you know you blue aliens are the smartest? Permondos could beat you at chess and he has a higher IQ!" Atzaplena stormed off and got back to work. Later the dining hall was finished. It was very small since there are only a few aliens. The aliens painted one table blue and one table green. The green aliens could only sit at the green table and the blue aliens could only sit at the blue table. This made some of the green aliens angry because they wanted to talk to the blue aliens. Atzaplena decided to bring it up to Zvaleien. "Zvaleien, why cant all of us eat together? We like to talk to each other. We cant eat together because us blue aliens are more evolved. We need to talk about things you aliens would not understand." The next day Eeblomg announced some new rules. "From now on there will be some changes. All of the blue aliens will get two more carrots and tomatoes while the green aliens will stick with just one. Also the blue aliens will be living on a different side of the village away from all the rest of you. The green aliens will be making all the buildings for the new village." The aliens worked nine hours a day to get the village finished. They worked harder and harder to finish. The aliens were talking about going to a different planet, but they didn't want to leave the planet. The blue aliens started sleeping in until noon while the green aliens woke up at six. The green aliens got fed up and had a meeting on their side of town. " The blue aliens are completely controlling us!" yelled an alien. "They are so lazy!" " Why do they get more food?" came from the other side of the room. "Quite!", yelled Atzaplena. "We need a plan. Everyone go to bed and we will talk about it in the morning.

The next day after work the green aliens met to talk about the revolution. Once they started talking for a while they had a plan. "Tomorrow after the blue aliens wake up we will all get together --" Atzaplena was cut off the the bang of a closing door. "What is this?" yelled Zvaleien. "Well, I guess sooner is better than later. ATTACK!!!", yelled Atzaplena.

There were aliens everywhere hitting an kicking each other. The green aliens were destroying the blue aliens buildings. "Wait!", said Atzaplena, " You think you aliens are smarter than us right?" "Yes", said

Zvaleien. "Well, if our smartest alien can beat you at chess, the green aliens get to decide how things rule." "And if I win?" said Zvaleien. "We don't complain about how you rule." "Deal" The green aliens picked Permondos to play the chess game with Zvaleien. "You really think you can beat me?", asked Zvaleien. "Of course I can.", said Permondos confidently. After a few nail biting minutes someone spoke. "Checkmate. I win." Permondos was lifted onto the other aliens shoulders cheering in victory.

The End

Dean Groom Activity #2
The two kids had just put on their skies when a brood of snow monsters, which had gotten very hungry, stormed down the mountain, growling loudly and looking from side to side to find some thing to eat. The snow lodge looked very inviting, so the monsters went inside and ate a cheeseburger. At the last moment Mary, the silly, pretty white snow monster who pulled the monsters sleds, came prancing in, and ate some fries drenched in ketchup.

Kelsey Alex and Nicole's 5 resolutions
1) eat more chocolate

2) Donate chocolate to the chocolate-less

3) eat healthier types of chocolate

4) Eat fewer faces

5) Exercise allot more from eating all that chocolate and faces