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My Mini Saga There once was a boy whose parents didn't understand him and didn't support him in any way. So one day after he couldn't take their shenanigans so he ran away to the Forest. When he got there he made a house out of leaves and string. He ate good fish.

Oklahoma UtopiaByLance Morgan



Once upon a time there were a people. Their names were Jeremiah, Miles, Davis, and Mabel. Miles and Jeremiah were buds and they always hung out after they were done at Richmond University at their flat because they were British. Davis and Mabel lived in a little cottage in Oklahoma out on a farm with cows. Jeremiah and Miles decided one day that they wanted to go to AMERICA!!! While they were waiting in the airport they were worrying about when they got there they might get crushed because they thought everybody in AMERICA was fat and they were short, skinny, and had ascents.

Their first flight took them to Chicago and when they got there they were pleasantly surprised that not everyone was fat even though they thought everybody waddled and they found out that Mcy Ds was awesome and they both got 3 Big Mac’s each and went to Wal-Mart to get a 5 pound bag of Lucky Charms. After their wait in Chicago they got back on a plane and flew to Florida but they crashed in Oklahoma in Davis and Mabel’s front lawn. Miles died. Jeremiah went to their house crying because Miles died and Davis and Mabel took care of him. Davis and Mabel didn’t have a phone because they lived on a farm with cows so he couldn’t call for help and he had to stay there for a little while. Nobody came looking for the crashed plane or Jeremiah because the Air Traffic Control thought they were playing Asteroids when the little picture of the plane disappeared so they went home.

After a month Jeremiah was still with Davis and Mabel and still didn’t know what he was going to do and that night Miles came back!!! That night when Davis and Mabel were milking the cows Miles came in and started coming up behind them slowly with dramatic music playing. When he got behind him he patted his back and Davis and Mabel freaked out and Davis got his head stuck in the bucket of milk and died and Mabel got killed by the cow because it raged about the milk spilling. Miles was sad that Davis and Mabel died because he liked milk. After that Miles was sad because they died so he went to the house and went to bed. In the morning he woke up early and made Jeremiah bacon and eggs with toast. When Jeremiah woke up and came to the kitchen he saw Miles sitting in front of the fireplace so Jeremiah was scared and he ran outside. Miles chased him down and tied him to a chair so he wouldn’t do anything stupid. Then he explained what happened and told Jeremiah that Davis and Mabel gave him the farm and left. So Miles and Jeremiah decided they were going to use the farm for a utopia and it would be the best. For the next few weeks they planned how they would run the utopia and who they would let into their society. After they decided on everything they started inviting people to Oklahoma.

The first people to arrive were their family and close friends who they trusted and thought would support them in their decisions. For a couple weeks it was just them and their family and they really mapped out they plan for government and made a book where all the laws would be written down. The first rule was nobody could come onto their land without permission. The second one was that nobody could leave without consulting Miles or Jeremiah. The third rule was that nobody had more authority than another and everybody got equal treatment and no discrimination. The fourth was that everybody had to work an equal amount of hours unless they wanted to work more than they had to. The fifth was that rules can be added or take away from the book as long as there is a 2/3 majority vote among the people.

Once everybody arrived which included Miles parents and sister and Jeremiahs parents and 2 brothers along with Dimitri and Charlie their close friends. So the work began harvesting the wheat, potatoes, and apples. Miles and Jeremiahs parents gathered the potatoes their brothers harvested the wheat while they picked apples. At a while of having plenty of food and lots of extra time on their hands Jeremiahs brother, John got bored of doing the same thing almost everyday and decided he would sneak out and go into town and find something to do. He got away with it for a few days but one night Miles was sitting outside looking at the stars when John was sneaking out of the window and caught him and brought him back inside and woke everyone up to ask them what to do.

After discussing what they should do they decided that John needed to do double the work ask his consequence for 2 weeks. John didn’t want to put up with their rules anymore so he was going to leave and he asked if anybody was going to come with him and Miles sister, Kate decided to go with him. After they were gone everybody else basically kept doing what they had been doing for the past month and things got very bland. So in an effort to keep everybody entertained Miles bought a TV and everybody got 30 minutes everyday to watch what they wanted. Then everybody wanted more time to watch and started arguing with each other about whose turn it was and that they didn’t get their full time to watch so they increased the time to an hour. This kept everybody happy for a few more weeks but then the same thing happed again arguing about it and so they increased it to 2 hours. A few days after this the production of food dropped so far that everybody barely got any food and had to skip lunch. Jeremiah finally decided to put an end to the TV and hid it in the attic and told everyone that they had to finish their work before they could watch it and he would bring it back out again. This work for a while but then they kept secretly watching it when Jeremiah was out and he found out and decided with Miles that they needed to get rid of it and they did but everybody else decided that it was against the rules of the Book and they rebelled and refused to do any work until they got it back. While they thought they would bring it back they actually decided to go back to England and go back to their normal lives without Lucky Charms and finish college at Richmond University and get married to have a normal life.

The End

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MIDDLE _ BEGINNING _ END Work Sheet


 * Describe the start of your story. || * Introduce your characters: Jeremiah, Miles, Davis, and Mabel.


 * What do they want? Not to die


 * Where are they going? Home ||
 * What happens in the middle of your story? || * How will all your story and characters develop? Miles dies


 * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Plot Twists and Turns? Miles comes back and kills Jeremiah


 * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">How will you lead up to the climax? Jeremiah comes back ||
 * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Outline the climax...How does the story end? || * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Is your ending what your readers are expecting? no


 * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Have you used foreshadowing throughout your story yes ||