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The turtle had just lain down when a crocodile, which had lost her babies, came up onto the bank, angrily snapping at whatever was in her way to find her baby. The turtle was laying right in the way as the crocodile approached him and questioned him. The turtle made kind of a wall around him and the turtles kid with his shell hoping the crocodile wouldn't notice him, and the turtle scared as could be, peeked out right when the crocodile, had been there At the last moment the the croc.Who with a grin on his face. with a baby crocodile on his snout. as he thanks the turtle. rough draft __**HERO'S**__ by
 * Steve Sullivan**

The Boss is the person that is always trying mischievous plans and trying to take the world over. He has one saying that he uses to threaten all of the other people." Never trust the innocent" hoping that an anyone who reads it will turn on the good. ONE MONTH BEFORE...As Mayor Dennis goes to present his speech about world pollution and as how we can Solve this problem, miles away is the two of the worst people ever. Drew "the boss" Dusky (Commonly just known as The Boss) and his apprentice in there lab figures plans and as how they can take the world over into their control...As a kid The Boss never was very social, as he was growing up he always got bullied and pushed around. To this day he never really liked anyone who was in control. To this day he has been figuring plans with his helpers help to take over the world into his control. Although Adam and Sam are his two least favorite people in the world, for the reason being that they always try to do the right thing and nothing different. As kids they always where straight A' students all the way up through high-school. Making them pretty close to "PERFECT”. But as the Boss has finally found the perfect solution to all of this mayhem. He orders his apprentice out and for a shocking reason...ONE WEEK LATER... as cries let out around the town and ambulances and fire trucks screech tires they Adam and his friend Sam comes outside to find that their father.Mayor Dennis has been shot and killed. as the boss comes to find that this is the perfect opportunity to take over this town. As he does so he tries to act like nothing’s wrong until he shuts down all the towns’ way of transportation And aboard everybody in town onto his old cruise ship waiting for his plan to work.ONE MONTH LATER...As the Boss looks for ways to take over the world he comes to realize that Adams friend Sam is really on the evil side.That the only one that can try to mess up his plans and have to worry about is Adam. He starts to like this so much that He made her one of his other apprentices. In shock of why his own sister would betray him like that, Adam goes to try to find more people who could help him on his journey to end this battle between The boss and all of the citizens. As everyone lines up to approach and see the boss. They give them anopportunity to become better than the rest and join his side, but know one decides Take up on that offer. He tells them that anyone who joins him will be treated fairly and Better than the rest. And then teach them to never trust the innocent. That’s what he actually says A lot to the people of that city to try and brainwash them into joining him. Meanwhile in the lines of Questioning by the boss, Adam finds a couple people to join him on seeking His goal to end the bosses runs of dictatorship. As he tries and start the quest he finds that its Not as easy as it seems. As he looks tries to get around the guards But in his plan he encounters guards... as he fights and fights he ends up losing due to his Personality...He never intends to hurt a live of another human. So he ends up getting thrown in a jail in the boat. Then the boss Ends up taking the cruise ship around the world looking for the perfect place to start. While there on the ocean looking for the place they realize that most of the other citizens actually Are thinking about suicide... dreading the future to come...As about every half of an hour to come he brainwashes them with What he uses as propaganda..."never trust the innocent” Then brainwashes many of the civilians to go bad and help His dream of taking over the world...Sam is one of them .Then Adam realizes that Sam is actually part Of The Bosses plan to try to take over the world! So as he tries to stop all this he gets a group of citizens together and starts to Rebel and take over the ship as he and his group come closer to achieving goal they run into some problems. They try to stop the guards But get over powered. Then the twist is as Sam goes down to see the prisoners, Looks right into Adams eyes with a twisted grin on her face. As he sits there thinking about what that had meant. Staring through the window weeping in sorrow As he learns that this could be the end of his life.3 hours later the boat comes To a sudden stop... as Adam wakes up from his nap. He assumes that the ride is over and that The Bosses plan has worked. As to find Sam at the door motioning for him to come out. As he Did he have found that The Boss has been killed and the ship is heading back to town? As they go to the town 1/2 an hour has passed and he questioned Sam as to why would she turn on The Boss Like that... risking her life to save others... she replied “it’s my job" and then they here a voice replying" that's not over yet" as they turn around they see the apprentice holding a gun to her head holding her hostage. As she screams one Of the citizens come to try to fight apprentice... so he lets her go and the weak citizen is easily Over powered but that's not what he was worried about. Sam grabs the gun and points it at his head as he was crying he begs and begs to be spared... and doesn't get shot but abandoned in the ocean as they all cheer and clap as they had succeeded. Then as they head back to their home they encounter to more problems they are heading in the oceans full of Deadly obstacles they have to get through. As they go through the dreadful oceans they hit an ice berg and the ship starts to sink! As they all scream in terror they remember the bosses saying that he said all the time...”Never trust the Innocent" As they remember that they all scream in horror as the ship sinks and they come to find that the Boss has risen from the dead. But as they tell him the problem, He smiles and pulls a remote out of his Pocket and presses this red button that makes the ship floats and bring everyone to safety. He said he gave up his dreams of Taking the world over and as we can all tell the real hero's that saved everyone life is the one who was always Lecturing people and brainwashing them that being good is overrated, turns out to be the real hero. THE END

MIDDLE _ BEGINNING _ END Work Sheet and not share authority with any other person or thing.He is working on ruling the world to take it over to start his "operation" so he will brainwash everyone in the world to obey him.
 * "The Boss" is the leader of the civilians and what he wants to do is rule the world

Adam is one of the smarter ones who knows how to find everybody's way out of this mess. He tries to help everyone and is a good citizen except in the eyes of "The Boss".

Sam is one who doesn't really know what to do...she wants to rebel and question "The Boss" but is terrified of the consequences.

Apprentice is "The Boss" 's favorite civilian ecause is the only one who goes along with his plans and doesn't question him. Apprentice also wants to help take over the world along with "The Boss" || * Introduce your characters:


 * What do they want?

are thinking about suicide... dreading the future to come.. then Adam realizes that Sam is Actually part of The Bosses plan to try to take over the world! so as he tries to stop all this he gets a group of citizens together and starts to rebel and take over the ship as he and his group come closer to achieving goal they run into some problems. they try to stop the guards but get over powered. then the twist is as Sam goes down to see the prisoners, she looks right into Adams eyes with a twisted grin on her face. || * How will all your story and characters develop?
 * Where are they going? ||
 * While there on the ocean looking for the place they realize that most of the other citizens actually


 * Plot Twists and Turns?

as he sits there thinking about what that had meant. staring through the window weeping in sorrow as he learns that this could be the end of his life. 3 hours later the boat comes to a sudden stop.. as Adam wakes up from his nap. he assumes that the ride is over and that The Bosses plan has worked. as to find Sam at the door motioning for him to come out. as he did he has found that The Boss has been killed and the ship is heading back to town. as they go to the town 1/2 an hour has passed and he questioned Sam as to why would she turn on The Boss like that... risking her life to save others.. she replied " its my job" and then they here a voice replying" that's not over yet" as they turn around they see The apprentice holding a gun to her head holding her hostage. as she screams one of the citizens come to try to fight apprentice.. so he lets her go and the weak citizen is easily overpowerd but thats not what he was worried about. Sam grabs the gun and points it at his head as he was crying he begs and begs to be spared... and doesn't get shot but abanded in the ocean as they all cheer and clap as they had succeded. || * Is your ending what your readers are expecting? no
 * How will you lead up to the climax? ||
 * Outline the climax...How does the story end?


 * Have you used foreshadowing throughout your story. yes ||


 * Describe the start of your story. || * Introduce your characters:


 * What do they want?


 * Where are they going? ||
 * What happens in the middle of your story? || * How will all your story and characters develop?


 * Plot Twists and Turns?


 * How will you lead up to the climax? ||
 * Outline the climax...How does the story end? || * Is your ending what your readers are expecting?


 * Have you used foreshadowing throughout your story ||