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Mini Saga It was at the beginning of the year when my friends and I were all just excited to go to Middle School and even though we were going to Middle School we thought we would still hang out, but we would have thought this big problem would come our way…….

__Friends...True or Not __ By: KaiAsha Mitchell



Hi there, my name is Jennifer and here's what happened in Middle School. It was the beginning of the school year when my friends Sally, Timmy, Kaylee, Jon, and Brian and I were starting Middle School and we all were just so excited even though we would be on different teams in Middle School we thought that we all would still hang out. Anyways it was the morning of the first day of school and we all talked until we had to go to class that evening we all went to the playground that was close to all of our houses and we all just talked about how cool our first day was. Then a couple weeks passed and we all made new friends, but we still hung out and talked about how fun Middle school was. Another couple of weeks passed and Timmy couldn't hang out with us because he was with someone else we all thought nothing of it, then Sally and Kaylee started not hanging out with us anymore so it was Jon, Brian, and I who still hung out. At school we started to notice that Timmy, Sally, and Kaylee all we hanging out together with the meanest popular kids there was in the seventh grade. So we went up to them and asked what they were doing and why they weren't hanging out with us all they did was laugh and say "Who are you again? And why are you talking to us? And Get out of here nerds!!!" so then we just walked away disappointed after a week we kept trying to figure out why Timmy, Kaylee, and Sally would say those mean and hurtful things so we tried and tried to call them to ask them why they would do that. So finally we just forgot about the whole thing because we figured it wasn't that big of a deal anyway, but deep down inside me and Jon could tell Brian didn't really let it go.......Then a couple weeks passed and Timmy, Sally, and Kaylee and all the other popular kids just wouldn’t stop playing pranks on us and saying mean comments, also Brian hadn't spoken to us, but finally he spoke to us and said we need to get revenge against the popular kids. Jon and I said "But why???" and Brian said “Because of the things they did to us!!!” with a loud voice, but I thought we put that behind us. “Well I didn’t” he said “Well I guess it wouldn’t be that bad because they did do hurtful things” I said. “I agree” Jon said. "So how are we going to do this whole revenge thing?" Jon and I said. “Well first we try to pretend we don't care about what they did to us, then we try to lavish them with presents like gum, chocolate, and other things they like, but we don’t exactly give them the things the way they are we change them a bit” Brian said….for example we all know Kaylee is allergic to peanuts so we give her things that contain peanut things basically we just give them things that give them an allergic reaction or that they hate and once they can’t handle it anymore we take our spots as the popular kids and make the popular kids do all our work and get to make fun of them.” Brian said. But that could be very hard and dangerous” I said. “Well Jennifer if we want revenge we have to play mean like they did” Jon said. “Well I guess that makes sense” I said. Then Brian just started making up these plans for are revenge with this plan we all had our separate people to revenge on” After a couple week the popular kids we miserable so Brian thought that this was finally the time to take our spots as the popular kids. So we did what we had to do to succeed with our plan. So after a couple days passed we had our rightful spots as the popular kids. In our process where we were taking our spots as the popular kids Timmy, Sally, and Kaylee were all trying to be our friends again and apologize, but Brian just told them to “Shut up and get out of here” The plan actually worked out perfect. They now nerdy kids who were popular including Timmy, Sally, and Kaylee were all getting pranked by us. We were all feeling great about our success and this went on successfully for a couple months until………..The now nerdy kids try to get revenge on us but they did not come prepared and we still won the battle. As we were still in glory of our success Jon and I realized that Brian was being a little more demanding toward Jon and I but, we didn’t think much of it. Then a month later the nerdy kids tried to become popular again but they didn’t succeed but they did convince quite a few of our friends to come on their side. Then Brian became furious so he had us do a surprise attack on the nerdy kids as a punishment. Which Jon and I and the rest of our friends thought wasn’t necessary but we didn’t want to argue with him so we just went along with it. Then a month later Brian made us all of his little helpers that did everything for him which my friends and I couldn’t stand anymore so we decided to get revenge on him. With this plan in motion Jon and I had a secret meeting with our other friends but not everybody showed up but we still continued with our meeting so they next day we tried to get revenge but the kids who didn’t show up to our meeting were the ones who told Brian about our revenge so we didn’t succeed and Brian gave us an extreme punishment and it was that we were now the nerdy kids once again nut know there was less popular kids then nerdy. So about four months passed and the nerdy kids Jon and I had all came up with a very detailed plan but somehow they still beat us and we still were Brian’s helpers and still the nerdy kids…….Which in this case we were still miserable but we knew one day we would get revenge on Brian and all of his friends who still stood by him.

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 * ~ STORY IN A WEEK Tales of Utopia MIDDLE _ BEGINNING _ END Work Sheet ||~  ||~   ||
 * Describe the start of your story. || * Title- Friends...True or Not
 * Introduce your characters:Sally, Timmy, Kaylee, Jennifer, Jon, Brian
 * What do they want?Beginning-All of them to stay friends/Middle/End-Get Revenge on popular kids.
 * Where are they going?East Middle School ||
 * What happens in the middle of your story? || * How will all your story and characters develop?Story-Middle School changes there personality's.Characters-still hang out but not as much and start to go different ways.
 * Plot Twists and Turns?Don't hang out as much.Also some friends get more popular (Mean Popular) and turn rude and mean towards the other friends.
 * How will you lead up to the climax? ||
 * Outline the climax...How does the story end? || * Is your ending what your readers are expecting?
 * Have you used foreshadowing throughout your story ||

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