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Mini Saga's She thought, it has happened again. The girl ran to the bathroom and slammed the door shut. "Why does everyone blame me when my brother is the one doing the bad things." She ran this line through her head many times before she fell fast asleep. She awoke in sweats.

She awoke in sweats to screaming behind her in the alley. She could do nothing about the dreadful things that were going on around her. Even her own mother had gone behind her back as soon as all this started. She ran out of the bathroom to see her brother.

__The Evil Nazi's __

By

 Kaitlyn Radonich



There was once a family that had been on the planet Pluto for some time. The family was typical with a mom, dad, and their offspring. The mother was Jamie, the father was Ben, the daughter was Emma and the son was Landon. The family together always dreamed of going back to earth one day, until it finally happened. In the year of 1008 D.C. but not before the worst time of their lives came. The problem all began when one day Nazi’s from the planet earth, came to Pluto and took over. They tortured the people and started taking some away to a ware house. Nobody ever saw that human being again. At least they don’t think? They claimed to the Marstopians (people that lived on Pluto) that they were sent to help the people out by holding dominion over them. They console the humans, saying, "Do not imagine, Marstopians, that leadership is a pleasure. On the contrary, it is a deep and heavy responsibility. No one believes more firmly than us that all people are equal. We would be only too happy to let you make your decisions for yourselves. But sometimes you might make the wrong decisions, Marstopians, and then where should we be?" The classic hypocrisy seen here is too hard to miss. The people thought that was true. But it wasn’t until later they knew the truth. “I remember the time when life was great” Emma said to her one hot summer day. Emma was mistreated by her parents as soon as the Nazi’s took over. Her mom would blame her for everything and her dad was continently abusing her. Whenever the mom had to go to work or go get something for herself, she would blame it on Emma. Her father was also abusing her. One day their pet, an alien cat, started eating Emma’s moms, toes. Her mom screamed and started smacking Emma with a broom stick. Emma ran to the bathroom and slammed the door while faint tears streaked her already rosy face. She fell asleep running this line through her head over and over again, “why do I always get blamed for everything?” She awoke in sweats from a shrilling scream from out back in the alley. It was her friend Mrs. Tuey. She was being choked to death by five of the Nazi soldiers. She knew where she was going to be taken; the ware house. She was so terrified that she quickly sprinted back inside and slammed the door shut. She leaned against the door and started crying. Her heart ached for her friend and her body was limp feeling after what she saw. She knew that anyone caught sneaking upon the Nazi’s when they were kidnapping someone would result in them being kidnapped too. But what happened the next day was much unexpected. She was walking down Main Street when a boy about 5’ 9” with green hair and blush skin walked next to her. He asked her, “What is your name.” <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;"> She thought to herself, keep walking, so she walked to the side and went past but he kept following her. She starting jogging but he just tagged along. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">She finally asked, “What do you want from me?” <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">He simply replied, “I was thinking that you might know who my family is?” <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">She stated, “I don’t have a brother. In fact I am an only child.” <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">He asked, “Is your last name Cunning, Emma Cunning?” <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">The conversation went on to her asking him how he knew about her and her family and he said he had learned about it back on the earth. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">She forgot about everything and they both quickly sprinted home. When they reached the front door, she told him to wait in the hall so she could find Jamie. They snuck into the house and she walked very slowly to their mother’s room. When Emma told her mom about her brother, her mom quickly hit her across the face and told her to stop telling lies. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">“But it’s true! His name is Landon and when he was 4, he climbed onto a shuttle that was flying back to earth!” she screamed this right to her mother’s face. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">Her mom started balling and laughing all at the same time. She finally stopped and allowed Emma to bring her to him. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">They found him looking around. With eyes to Landon and a dropped jaw, the mother ran to him. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">It happened so quickly that they didn’t even call the dad at work. He just came home that night and found them all together at the dinner table. He thought it was all a dream. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">The next day Emma and Landon started to plan out how they could get back to earth without the Nazi’s knowing. They got a plan and all they needed to do was find the shuttle. Landon was pretty sure he knew where the Nazi’s kept the shuttle and he claimed that there were no guards around it nightly. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">That night they went to find the shuttle. They had found it but before they took off, they would have to find a group of people and they would need to pack a few things. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">The very next night they were off! <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">They got it started and took off. They made it to earth safely. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;"> On Pluto, the Marstopians were rebelling to the Nazi’s. It happened so fast that nobody cared what happened to the Nazi’s on the way home that night. None of the family or friends of the people that went back to earth with Emma and Landon knew where they had gone. They simply thought that they had been taken to the ware house sometime in the night. The rest of the people that lived on Pluto died throughout the next 45 years because they ran out of resources. They also didn’t have a shuttle to get back to earth. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">The people that came back to earth lived happily ever after. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;"> THE END

STORY IN A WEEK Tales of Utopia

Dean Groom (Activity # 2) <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 14.4px; text-align: left;">The two dogs had laid down for the night when the children of the pigs they lived with, who had lost their father in a skiing accident, walked awkwardly toward the two dogs, while shoving each other about from side to side. The horse in the barn knew that the dogs were mean she huddled around them in a sort of circle and they soon quieted down in her hole down inside and fell fast asleep, snoring whenever they heard a noise. At the last moment before everyone was asleep Mollie, the mean and crazy, ugly multi colored horse who took Mr. Nerd all over town in the carriage, came cavorting in while singing, and chewing a lump of bubble gum.
 * Describe the start of your story. || * Introduce your characters:
 * Emma
 * Emma's mom (Jamie)
 * Emma's dad (Ben)
 * Brother (Landon)
 * The Evil Government / The Evil Nazi
 * What do they want?
 * The Nazi's want every living human that lives on the planet Pluto to be dead by the end of the dragging summer.
 * The Cunning family want to move a whole shuttle of people back to the earth. Or they just want to live a normal life with all their friends and family.
 * Where are they going?
 * To Marquez a little island on off the coast of Silva on the planet Pluto. (The Nazi's)
 * To Great Falls, Mt on the planet earth. ||
 * What happens in the middle of your story? || * How will all your story and characters develop?
 * Emma finally meets her brother Landon after 13 years already of her life.
 * Her brother was 4 years old when another space shuttle was taking off to go to the earth. The door of the shuttle was open and no one was there so he decided it was best that he crawled right in with the crowd that was coming. He ended up going back to earth and having to wait for 13 years before he could come back home to his family. The family thought they had lost him forever so they had Emma.
 * Landon becomes very close to his sister once he realizes that she is in danger.
 * Emma becomes known to her mother's temper. Same with Landon.
 * Plot Twists and Turns?
 * When the family finally ends up catching a shuttle ride back to earth.
 * The Nazi's rocket / shuttle ends up landing in the middle of space and they all die.
 * How will you lead up to the climax?
 * Emma meets her brother and start planning on ways to get off of the planet Pluto and back home to the earth. ||
 * Outline the climax...How does the story end? || * Is your ending what your readers are expecting?
 * Yes because the Cunning family is going to get back home and the Nazi's lose terribly.
 * Have you used foreshadowing throughout your story
 * Yes ||

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