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Zane and Patty and Harry felt lonely. They decided to go out and find some Polar Bears to drink some Coca Cola with. They didn't. know that they were on ice. They fell in the ice and the polar bears watched while they were drinking their Coca Cola. They froze.
 * Mini Saga**

MY STORY: By,Allisyn LaMere Animal Farm Quote: "Napoleon is our leader,he is always right."
 * __The 3 Friends That Could__**

In a faraway land, there lived a Hippo named Harry, A Penguin named Panda, and a Zebra named Zane. They were going on a trip to Alaska to find Coca Cola. They wanted Coca Cola because a couple years back, the polar bears decided they were thirsty, so they went to Utah where the Penguin, the Hippo, and the Zebra lived. The Polar Bears went on a secret mission to get Coca Cola. They put dirt all over them, so they could look like brown bears so the 3 animals would give the polar bears Coca Cola. The Polar Bears(Looking like brown bears) said that they were just going to take it to Alaska to test it for rabies. The animals were dumb so they all said"OK". Months passed and the three animals decided that they wanted their Coca Cola back so they were going to go onto a search to find the Polar Bears.They figured out that they were not brown bears, they were actual polar bears. Panda said "I don't think this is a good idea, going to find them." "You shush down there! I am your leader!" Zane had said. Harry was listening to their conversation. Harry was just a fat ol' hippo who didn't want to do anything but sit and watch Good Luck Charlie on Disney Channel. Zane got really mad at Harry sometimes because Harry had to do his job but he was always watching TV.While Panda always wanted to do things her way. Zane also got mad because he always thought it was always his choice and not anybody else's choice. Zane was secretly training little Ducks to attack his crew if they weren't following his rules. That was the wrong thing to do, but nobody knew about it. Zane had trained the ducks for months and months. Zane just wanted to be the leader. One day they had a meeting in their secret sewage pipe. The three animals wanted to get to Alaska as soon as possible. The polar bears almost had drank all of the coca cola. The 3 animals knew that if all the Coca Cola was gone, then their would not be a lot of happiness in Utah. But it would also be a good thing because lots of animals wouldn’t have to go to the animal vet. The animal mom’s would be kind of happy because of that. Later that day, the animals went to the Library for information on how to get to Alaska, they figured that they could build a rocketship, but they weren’t that smart. They decided that they wanted to take a train. Then they looked at the train routes and there was only one’s that went down south. They were almost out of all options, but Harry finally got off his butt and looked at the screen. He saw an airplane and asked “What’s that?” They decided to click on it. It took them to another website. There was all kinds of airplanes on that website. They looked at boarding times and arrival times. There were going to Alaska in two days. They would leave at 6 o’ clock in the morning and arrive at 6 o’clock at night. “That should be good.” said Panda. They had found their way to Alaska. The days went by quickly, before they knew it, it was the day that they were going to go to Alaska. They got to the airport on time and had boarded and arrived right on time. Now they had to find the polar bears. They went into town, and there was a sign that read, “Nothing suspicious in here,” Panda told Zane that they should go in there. They all went in there. They had found the polar bears. They were all in a factory. They had a machine that figured out what was in the Coca Cola. They put one of the cans that they had in there and it didn’t work. They polar bears were very angry because they wanted to find out what was in the Coca Cola so they could have an unlimited supply of it. The 3 animals were just sitting and listening to the polar bears conversation. The polar bears said that they would go back to Utah and shove Harry, Panda, and Zane up the tree. They said they would leave now in their Mini-Bear-Van. Every single one of the polar bears left. It was the 3 animal’s chance to take all of the Coca Cola and get out of Alaska. Harry did not want to pack anything. Panda had yelled at him and said “Zane is our leader, He is always right!” Harry finally did what she said. They packed every single Cola into the boxes. The 3 animals had accomplished what they wanted. They decided that they weren’t going to go back to Utah, instead they would move into the East coast, they are going to live in Maine.
 * The End**

Deangroom Activity 2

My mini Saga

The hippo was about to sit on something. He knew he shouldn't. He didn't know what it was, he touched it and threw rocks at it. Suddenly, it moved, it was another hippo. The hippo started to stand up and chased him. They ran into a tree. They said oh cheese.

Zane and Patty and Harry felt lonely. They decided to go out and find some Polar Bears to drink some Coca Cola with. They didn't. know that they were on ice. They fell in the ice and the polar bears watched while they were drinking their Coca Cola. They froze.

The zebra had just laid down when a brood of penguins, who were looking for their grandma, filed into the igloo, waddling quickly and looking from side to side to find their grandma. Zane the zebra made a penguin house, and the penguins nestled down inside it and promptly fell asleep. At the last moment Patty, the foolish, pretty white penguinette who drew Zane's trap, came rushing in, chewing at a lump of cheese.Patty fell in love with Zane. They lived happily ever after and had Pebra babies.



MIDDLE _ BEGINNING _ END Work Sheet


 * Describe the start of your story. || * Introduce your characters: Harryand Panda and Zane.


 * What do they want? Coca Cola


 * Where are they going? To find Polar Bears ||
 * What happens in the middle of your story? || * How will all your story and characters develop?


 * Plot Twists and Turns?


 * How will you lead up to the climax? ||
 * Outline the climax...How does the story end? || * Is your ending what your readers are expecting?


 * Have you used foreshadowing throughout your story ||