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They both also had another friend named Ajax. These three friends had one goal. To create the perfect society where all people are equal. The three friends set out on a journey to find a perfect build site. They chose a site nestled in between some mountains with a river.

__**THE UTOPIA **__ By, Connor Dennis

Maximilian and Falious had been friends since they were kids. They both also had another friend named Ajax. These three friends had one goal. To create the perfect society where all people are equal. The three friends set out on a journey to find a perfect build site. They chose a site nestled in between some mountains with a river flowing through it and plenty of wild life and space to build a city. They decided to put the city on the river where there would be plenty of water, and maybe even a power source. One year later it was completed, and immigrants flocked to the city, because who wouldn't want to live someplace where everyone was equal. The city was christened Mira-Loci, meaning wonderful place.

 For a time all was well, until Falious was assassinated. This was a shock because in Mira-Loci murder was not committed. "Nobody stole, nobody grumbled over his rations, the quarreling and biting and jealousy which had been normal features of life in the old days had almost disappeared." Maximilian dropped into hopelessness. He barricaded himself in his house and no-one was permitted in except for Marisa, who acted as his new best friend.

 The city's management had always bean run through public meetings where citizens voted on laws and leaders where necessary. But ever so slowly there begun a change in the society. Ajax was leading the meetings more and more often, taking Maximilian's place. He introduced new laws where he and a few of his friends had special powers and rights that the others didn't. Whenever anyone asked why only Ajax and his friend's got power Ajax would say "I'm the only leader you have left because Maximilian has barricaded himself away and Falious has unfortunately passed away. If I don't have these powers our society will collapse." So the public accepted this reluctantly and went about there work as usual. Things were starting to change. Mercenaries were hired as guards and were placed at intersections. People no longer stopped to talk to each other and usually moved in groups. Anyone who spoke out against the government was forced to leave. Now Ajax was imposing a new law that require citizens to pay taxes. This was the first time taxes were even suggested. Before then the idea of taxes was laughable. Now they were being forced to. The idea was challenged, but Ajax said" If we do not get more money in the city coffers we will lose the protection of the mercenaries and our society will soon collapse.

 Two weeks later an emergency meeting was held where three honest hardworking citizens confessed to killing Falious. This came as a shock the investigation had long bean given over. Ajax had his mercenaries kill them for all to see. The citizens all retreated to their homes in terror. Many called to Maximilian for help, but he never responded. What the didn't know was that their letters were be destroyed before they reach Maximilian's house. Marisa kept telling Maximilian that Ajax was doing wrong and disobeying city code. But Maximilian wouldn't listen to her because he kept receiving false mail of how the city was being well run and was prosperous.

 Then one late summer day a citizen by the name of Rupert Moriano came to Maximilian's house unseen by the guards and knocked on the door. Maximilian answered and let the man in. The man told Maximilian what was going on in the city and how Ajax and his soldiers were taking over. At first Maximilian did not believe the man, but eventually what Rupert said started to make sense. Maximilian made a resolution to stop this madness. He requested a meeting with Ajax in his private office and confronted him. He said " Ajax, how could you break our pact and city code. You are a disgrace to this city. I hereby ban you from the city and you may never return." News soon reached the public. They cheered and marched in parade. They declared that day to be Salvation Day.

 Their success was short lived however. Ajax came back with his army of mercenaries. They laid siege to the city. Maximilian has very few options, with the stores being so low they would have bean starved into surrender before help could come. He could rally the citizens to fight Ajax's army but Ajax's army was professionally trained, and Maximilian's citizens were unused to the horrors of war. Luckily the city had always had a plan just in case of an emergency. There were tunnels dug below the city leading to a refuge area that none except for Maximilian and Marisa knew about. The citizens were led to safety while a few stayed behind to rig the city with traps for the invaders. Everyone was successfully removed and all traps were in place. Ajax's army invaded the following day and was destroyed by the well placed traps and the citizens came back to rebuild the city.

THE END

The 27 Cornish pixies had just finished eating school textbooks, when Mitchell, who believed that school is bad for the mind, started cheering and whooping with delight., teachers and students came dashing out of classrooms wondering what the racket was for, Mitchell seized his opportunity to rebel, he summoned his comrades and together they were victorious in driving the teachers out of the building. Connor summoned an army of faithful students, armed with airosoft guns and they with there great skill and natural intelligence brought the students to the police, and the students were congratulated and given a reward. At the last moment Mitchell in a last opportunity grabbed a students gun and fled from the scene, the foolish,and unintelligent students were put away behind bars.

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Table of Contents Best Friend: Falious Scipio. Other Friend: Ajax Julius ( All are 19 years of age) Female Char: Marisa Siciliani
 * Describe the start of your story. || * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Introduce your characters: Maximilian Brutus
 * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">What do they want: To create a Utopia
 * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Where are they going:To a site to build their city. ||
 * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">What happens in the middle of your story? || * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">How will all your story and characters develop: Maximilian will overcome his depression after Falious's death
 * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Plot Twists and Turns: Ajax is evil and power hungry
 * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">How will you lead up to the climax I will build up tensions between Ajax and the public. ||
 * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Outline the climax...How does the story end? || * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Is your ending what your readers are expecting
 * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Have you used foreshadowing throughout your stor ||

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