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 * These best friends were never apart. It was like they were sewn together. Until they met him. His name was Jacob and he seperated them all. It wasn't love or lust, but hatred. He turned them on each other faster than you could say, "We will always be best friends." **



**Getting The Drop...** **By:** **Liz McCarter** **Period 5**





Normally, this story would be about a girl and a boy who fall in love. Unfortunately, that is not the way these three girl's lives went.  On this gloomy, forsaken day, Hannah was sitting at home curled up on her chair reading the novel, "Daddy's Girl" by Lisa Scottoline. She had just turned the page when there came a knock on her front door. Hannah was home alone and was not expecting anyone, so she wondered who it could be. As she opened the door, she gasped. Standing there was the most beautiful man Hannah had ever seen. "Hello gorgeous." He said with a grin. "My name is Jacob Lanive. I'm new here and someone told me I could find a welcome party at this address." "S-s-s-sure." She stammered. She had never been one for small talk. Especially if it was to a handsome man like himself. "Um... Just give me a second... Come on in." Hannah told him. "First mistake." He whispered. "I'm sorry. What?" She asked. "Oh nothing." He replied smiling again and walking in. Hannah told him to make himself at home and went to her room to make herself more presentable. He knocked on her door and said, "I'm sorry to be running short, but I have an appointment." She came out and gave him her phone number. As he was off he thought, "Good luck."  A few blocks away, Anna was singing to her favorite song, "Mistletoe" by Justin Bieber. She was looking forward to going to the mall and getting a boyfriend. As she walked into the kitchen, there was a knock at her door. She opened it and stuttered, "H-h-hello." He replied, "Hello yourself. My name is Jacob Keefe. I heard I could get a welcome to the town party here?" Again with the stuttering! "M-m-my mom usually handles that stuff... She isn't in right now, but I can give her a call?" "That'd be amazing." He said grinning. "I'm sure you’re amazing too." Then she was thinking, "How?! How is THIS happening to me?! All these years of everyone turning up their noses at me and now HIM?!" Anna calmed herself and replied, "Okay. Could I have you write your name and number on this?" She ushered him into the house. As he wrote, she stared. He sure was beautiful. "All done." He said. "Thanks." She replied. As he turned to go he said, "No, thank YOU. Mistake one." "Excuse me?" Anna said. He assured her he had said nothing. She shut the door on his back and hopped up and down screaming, "OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD!" As he walked out, he transported to a young lady named Amy's home. "Knock, knock." He whispered. Across the door, Amy was mixing a Betty Crocker Funfetti cake. *Knock knock* She heard. "Coming!" She yelled. As she opened wide the door, she said, "My my. You’re a handsome one aren't you?" Jacob replied, "Only to you." and winked at her. "Hi. My name is Jacob Johnson. Nice to meet you." And extended his hand. "The pleasure is all mine. I'm Amy O'Donnell." Amy said, shaking his hand. "Would you mind if I got your number on here?" He asked holding out his phone. "Why not?" She thought as she grabbed it and typed in her name and number. "Thank you gorgeous." He said smiling. "No. Thank YOU handsome." Amy replied, grinning back. As she shut the door, he whispered again, "Mistake one."  About a half an hour later, they were all at the skating rink, when they spilled the news. "This guy... So cute... Very sweet... Asked for my number... I stuttered..." was all you heard. Coincidentally, they all were named Jacob.  As the night ended, at exactly midnight, they all got texts. Hannah's said, "Tomorrow. Giant Springs. Noon. Be there, or be square. ;)" Whereas Anna's said, "Mall. three o'clock. Meet me there hunny. ;)" The last one was for Amy and it said, "Fair. Half past six. Be prepared to have some fun. ;)" All were from their mystery guys, named Jacob.They stayed at Hannah's and as they all left, Hannah did too.  She was on her way to Giant Springs. She spent a VERY romantic three hours with Jacob and it ended with him kissing her hand and saying, "May I have the pleasure of dating you?" Of course, she said yes. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">As Jacob left, he worked his way to the mall. He met Anna there with two mochas in his hand. “How did you know I loved mochas?!” She asked. “Lucky guess…” He replied. On this date, he bought her a $100.00 necklace with matching earrings and they took romantic pictures together. As they were leaving, he asked her to go out with him. He said, “I would be honored to date you.” She said yes, obviously. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">Then, he headed to the fair. At the fair, Jacob and Amy rode every ride holding tight to each other on them. As they walked to the petting zoo, he said, "Amy, I would abosulutely love to go out with you." She replied, "I would love to go out with you.... more." With a sly grin. They all met at Anna's and told everything. "He said... I said... No way... I can't believe this..." They were best friends, but in the morning, they would all hate each other. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">So, it was 10 am the next day, and Hannah woke up to Anna and Amy screaming at each other. Amy yelled, “HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME?!” Anna yelled back, “I TOLD YOU! I DIDN’T DO ANYTHING!!!” Amy screamed, “THAT’S NOT WHAT COLLIN SAID! HE SAID YOU KISSED HIM! WHILE WE WERE TOGETHER! I BELIEVE HIM OVER YOU!!!” Anna calmed down and asked, “What happened to being best friends…?” Amy, hurt, stormed off and whispered, “You lied to me. That’s what happened.” Anna turned to Hannah and said, “AND YOU?!” TAKING MY SPOT AS MY MOTHER’S DAUGHTER?!” YEAH! SHE TOLD ME THAT. GET OUT!!!!!” Hannah replied, “WHATEVER! I have no idea what your talking about, but I’m outta here. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;"> Over the span of three years, they never talked again. Until the day they crashed. They finished the puzzle and made a plan to take him down. “The only good Jacob is a dead Jacob.” They all said. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">He came up to Hannah and said, “Hey hun. What’s going on?” Amy and Anna stepped out and said, “This is what’s going on. You put those thoughts into our heads and turned us on each other. You took us apart and put us under your spell. How could you?!” They said surprising him by tying him up. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">”We want you to know that we’ve known this all along. We had to wait until YOU trusted US, but now. Now you’re a gonner.” As they said this last sentence, they set their mystical unicorns forward and they combined as one screaming, “POWER RANGERS!” Let me just say, that Jacob Lanive, Keefe, and Johnson would never be seen in the third dimension again.

**<span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif; font-size: 200%;">THE END **

<span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">MIDDLE _ BEGINNING _ END Work Sheet

<span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">1) Jordan <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">2) Hannah <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">3) Amy <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">4) Jacob <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">The 3 girls want to be best friends again, but Jacob has <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">turned them on each other, and for some reason, they just <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">couldn't even bring themselves to talk to each other. <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">They travel around their town and find clues. Figuratively <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">speaking, they are traveling deep into the recesses of their <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">minds and learning who they really are. || <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">One by one. First, we introduce Jordan. Then Hannah, and <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">After they are introduced, we tell how Jacob comes into their <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">also one by one. <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Jacob will tell them that he is a sorcerer, but they won't believe <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">him. He will also come in many shapes and sizes. From spying <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">on them as a raven, to being their trusted guardian. Also, he will <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">repestedly betray them, and they won't care. <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Bu foreshadowing the fact that they are putting the pieces <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">together and that they are starting to come out of their "trance". <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Also, Jacob will start hanging around less and less so they have to <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">go follow him. That won't turn out too well. || <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">I hope it won't be, but they may end up knowing exactly what is <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">going to happen. <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Yes, I dropped hints that he was leaving and that they were <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">figuring out the puzzle. Also, I will drop hints that a "special" <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">guy is coming into their lives, all at once. ||
 * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Describe the start of your story. || * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Introduce your characters:
 * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">What do they want?
 * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Where are they going?
 * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">What happens in the middle of your story? || * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">How will all your story and characters develop?
 * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Plot Twists and Turns?
 * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">How will you lead up to the climax?
 * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Outline the climax...How does the story end? || * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Is your ending what your readers are expecting?
 * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Have you used foreshadowing throughout your story?

DEANGROOM ACTIVITY #2 The two horses had just lain down when a brood of ducklings, which had lost their mother, filed into the barn, cheeping feebly and wandering from side to side to find some place where they would not be trodden on. Clover made a sort of wall round them with her great foreleg, and the ducklings nestled down inside it and promptly fell asleep. At the last moment Mollie, the foolish, pretty white mare who drew Mr. Jones's trap, came mincing daintily in, chewing at a lump of sugar.

The two million crocodiles had just eaten 7 pounds of german chocolate when a flock of geese, which had no legs or eyes, waddled into the swamp, screaming their nasty little heads off and rolling down a steep incline to find some place where they would not be digested. Hellen, the "big daddy" (yes, he is a guy.), made a sort of quacking noise and flew up to a tree, and the other crocodiles started jumping up and down and howling until the geese stopped rolling and promptly fell asleep. At the last piece of chocolate, Achmed, the dead, mean white terrorist who performed in Jeff Dunham's shows, blew everything up, shouting, "SILENCE!! I KILL YOU!"

<span style="font-family: 'comic sans ms',cursive; font-size: 22px;">STORY IN A WEEK Tales of Utopia <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 22px;"><range type="comment" id="225218">‍ On this gloomy, forsaken day, Hannah was sitting at home curled up on her chair reading the novel, "Daddy's Girl" by Lisa Scottoline. She had just turned the page when there came a knock on her front door. Hannah was home alone and was not expecting anyone, so she wondered who it could be. As she opened the door, she gasped. Standing there was the most beautiful man Hannah had ever seen. "Hello gorgeous." He said with a grin. "My name is Jacob Lanive. I'm new here and someone told me I could find a welcome party at this address." "S-s-s-sure." She stammered. She had never been one for small talk. Especially if it was to a handsome man like himself. "Um... Just give me a second... Come on in." Hannah told him. "First mistake." He whispered. "I'm sorry. What?" She asked. "Oh nothing." He replied smiling again and walking in. Hannah told him to make himself at home and went to her room to make herself more presentable. He knocked on her door and said, "I'm sorry to be running short, but I have an appointment." She came out and gave him her phone number. As he was off he thought, "Good luck." A few blocks away, Anna was singing to her favorite song, "Mistletoe" by Justin Bieber. She was looking forward to going to the mall and getting a boyfriend. As she walked into the kitchen, there was a knock at her door. She opened it and stuttered, "H-h-hello." He replied, "Hello yourself. My name is Jacob Keefe. I heard I could get a welcome to the town party here?" Again with the stuttering! "M-m-my mom usually handles that stuff... She isn't in right now, but I can give her a call?" "That'd be amazing." He said grinning. "I'm sure you’re amazing too." Then she was thinking, "How?! How is THIS happening to me?! All these years of everyone turning up their noses at me and now HIM?!" Anna calmed herself and replied, "Okay. Could I have you write your name and number on this?" She ushered him into the house. As he wrote, she stared. He sure was beautiful. "All done." He said. "Thanks." She replied. As he turned to go he said, "No, thank YOU. Mistake one." "Excuse me?" Anna said. He assured her he had said nothing. She shut the door on his back and hopped up and down screaming, "OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD!" As he walked out, he transported to a young lady named Amy's home. "Knock, knock." He whispered. Across the door, Amy was mixing a Betty Crocker Funfetti cake. *Knock knock* She heard. "Coming!" She yelled. As she opened wide the door, she said, "My my. You’re a handsome one aren't you?" Jacob replied, "Only to you." and winked at her. "Hi. My name is Jacob Johnson. Nice to meet you." And extended his hand. "The pleasure is all mine. I'm Amy O'Donnell." Amy said, shaking his hand. "Would you mind if I got your number on here?" He asked holding out his phone. "Why not?" She thought as she grabbed it and typed in her name and number. "Thank you gorgeous." He said smiling. "No. Thank YOU handsome." Amy replied, grinning back. As she shut the door, he whispered again, "Mistake one." About a half an hour later, they were all at the skating rink, w<span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">hen they spilled the news. "This guy... So cute... Very sweet... Asked for my number.. <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">. I stuttered..." was all you heard. Coincidentally, they all were named Jacob. <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;"> As the night ended, at exactly midnight, they all got texts. Hannah's said, "Tomorrow. Giant Springs. Noon. Be there, or be square. ;)" Whereas Anna's said, "Mall. three o'clock. Meet me there hunny. ;)" The last one was for Amy and it said, "Fair. Half past six. Be prepared to have some fun. ;)" All were from their mystery guys, named Jacob.They stayed at Hannah's and as they all left, Hannah did too. <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;"> She was on her way to Giant Springs. She spent a VERY romantic three hours with Jacob and it ended with him kissing her hand and saying, "May I have the pleasure of dating you?" Of course, she said yes. <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">As Jacob left, he worked his way to the mall. He met Anna there with two mochas in his hand. “How did you know I loved mochas?!” She asked. “Lucky guess…” He replied. On this date, he bought her a $100.00 necklace with matching earrings and they took romantic pictures together. As they were leaving, he asked her to go out with him. He said, “I would be honored to date you.” She said yes, obviously. <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Then, he headed to the fair. At the fair, Jacob and Amy rode every ride holding tight to each other on them. As they walked to the petting zoo, he said, "Amy, I would abosulutely love to go out with you." She replied, "I would love to go out with you.... more." With a sly grin. They all met at Anna's and told everything. "He said... I said... No way... I can't believe this..." They were best friends, but in the morning, they would all hate each other. So, it was 10 am the next day, and Hannah woke up to Anna and Amy screaming at each other. Amy yelled, “HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME?!” Anna yelled back, “I TOLD YOU! I DIDN’T DO ANYTHING!!!” Amy screamed, “THAT’S NOT WHAT COLLIN SAID! HE SAID YOU KISSED HIM! WHILE WE WERE TOGETHER! I BELIEVE HIM OVER YOU!!!” Anna calmed down and asked, “What happened to being best friends…?” Amy, hurt, stormed off and whispered, “You lied to me. That’s what happened.” Anna turned to Hannah and said, “AND YOU?!” TAKING MY SPOT AS MY MOTHER’S DAUGHTER?!” YEAH! SHE TOLD ME THAT. GET OUT!!!!!” Hannah replied, “WHATEVER! I have no idea what your talking about, but I’m outta here. Over the span of three years, they never talked again. Until the day they crashed. They finished the puzzle and made a plan to take him down. “The only good Jacob is a dead Jacob.” They all said. He came up to Hannah and said, “Hey hun. What’s going on?” Amy and Anna stepped out and said, “This is what’s going on. You put those thoughts into our heads and turned us on each other. You took us apart and put us under your spell. How could you?!” They said surprising him by tying him up. ”We want you to know that we’ve known this all along. We had to wait until YOU trusted US, but now. Now you’re a gonner.” As they said this last sentence, they set their mystical unicorns forward and they combined as one screaming, “POWER RANGERS!” Let me just say, that Jacob Lanive, Keefe, and Johnson would never be seen in the third dimension again. || ||
 * <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">MINI-SAGA! **
 * <span style="font-family: 'comic sans ms',cursive;">These best friends were never apart. It was like they were sewn together. Until they met him. His name was Jacob and he seperated them all. It wasn't love or lust, but hatred. He turned them on each other faster than you could say, "We will always be best friends." **
 * <span style="font-family: 'comic sans ms',cursive;">The horses were dying. They had been shot and couldn't even walk. They all thought their master had loved them, but they were wrong. He was going to sell them, until they started talking. He knew they could not be sold, therefore, the had to be killed. All for money. **
 * To all the girls he talked to. To all the girls he complimented. To all the girls he won over. He got their numbers and knew they were his. What he didn’t know was that they were about to get the scoop on him instead of the other was around. **
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 * <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Rough Draft- Part 1 || <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">1-5-2012 || Normally, this story would be about a girl and a boy who fall in love. Unfortunately, that is not the way these three girl's lives went.