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Ollie the octopus had just gone into the castle to warn king Xerses about the invasion of swimming monkeys. They planned on eating all of the brains of the villagers. Xerses had a plan he summoned Ollie, he whispered something in his ear. Ollie then ran to sound the alarm.

__Katmandu__ By Stevie McNamee 



Down under, the sea great things were happening in Katmandu. King Xerses was about to make the decision, of actually letting the sharks into the village. Ollie the Octopus Xerses 's right hand man, who was also Xerses 's best friend, was trying to convince him to say yes. Ollie said,” Why don’t you like the idea, t he sharks said they were vegetarians, what’s the worse thing that could happen ? ” “You only want them to come because, they have gold” said Xerses, “ B ut why not, what’s the worse that could happen” So Xerses sent Ollie out to tell the village, the villagers disagreed at first but then after Ollie said “ w hat’s the worse that could happen”, they all agreed. Then he smiled and swam as fast as he could to unlock the gates and let the sharks in.

When the sharks first came in the fish were nervous, they were scared they would eat them. B ut, they did the exact opposite, th e y brought food and bags of gold! The sharks were really nice to all of the fish especially the leader Avery, she was the most beautiful creature any of the fish had every seen. The way her blue eyes shined in the light, or how shiny her skin was. Even her sharp teeth were beautiful. The sharks were nice to the fish for weeks even Murtle the old, grouchy sea turtle started enjoying having the sharks around. Bu t too much time without meat was starting to affect the sharks, they started getting crabby, tiredand mean. The old shark that played chess with Murtle started throwing fits when he lost, he had never done that before. The little sharks that played soccer with little fish started sleeping instead. Avery started yelling at people for just looking at her. Xerses knew he had to deal with this but how? He went over to Ollie’s house to ask for help, but when he got there he couldn’t get in, so he went in through the bathroom window, which was the only way to get in or out because everything else was covered with bags of gold. Xerses was stunned, how did Ollie get all of this gold? Xerses found Ollie in the kitchen counting gold. “Where did you get all of this gold?” Xerses asked. Ollie jumped up and screamed. “Oh king you scared me, if I would have known you were coming I would have picked up”, exclaimed Ollie. Xerses was not impressed he asked again "w here did you get all of this gold?” “I’m so sorry Xerses, I lied the sharks are not vegetarians, they still eat fish, they paid me to trick you into letting them in.” Xerses was furious but he didn’t have time to argue with Ollie, he had to save his kingdom first. He swam as fast as he could to the emergency alarm. As soon as the alarm was sounded the fish swam so fast to their hiding spots it looked like they just disappeared. The sharks didn’t know what was going on. Avery went to Xerses, who wasn’t afraid because he was poisonous to sharks. “Where did the fish go” she demanded. “They are hiding from you, I know you are not a vegetarian,"No animal shall kill any other animal without cause. ” said Xerses. “How did you find out?” Avery said. “OUT” yelled Xerses. Avery was shocked no one had every yelled at her, she didn’t know what to do but to obey. So she took her minions and left. On her way out she yelled “mark my words, I will be back, you can count on that.” Xerses knew she meant that so as soon as they were gone and the gate was locked he sent out for an army. They trained for weeks, finally on the last day of the training Xerses tinkled on all of soldiers hoping that it would make them poisonous too. A week after training Ollie the octopus came swimming in warning the king that and invasion of swimming monkeys had just broken down the gate and were here to eat all of their brains! Xerses confused said” are you being serious!?” Ollie was laughing so hard you could barely understand what he was saying,”No”, ha ha ha. After he caught his breath he said” the Sharks are on there way though.” Xerses sounded the war alarm, all at once the fish put down what they were doing and swam to their battle stations.

It took the sharks about 5 second to break down the gate. All of the sharks had armor and had sharpened their teeth. Avery who came in last also carried a // wolaver // //tooth.( one of those fish with the lights on their head, they also have really sharp teeth)// The fish thought they were doomed, but then they remembered the pee! All at once the fish yelled” Eat our Pee,” all the sharks could do was laugh. all together they stopped laughing and started chasing the fish. One of the biggest sharks caught a fish and as soon as he landed on his mouth the sharks died, it only took 3 seconds, and then the little fish swam out singing. It took about five sharks to die before they realized the fish were poisonous. Then the fish started dancing and sharks didn’t know what to do so they left. Meanwhile Avery was chasing Xerses, Xerses was a smart fish. He knew that all Avery had to do was stab him once with the wolaver tooth and he was dead. But besides being smart he was fast. He swam as fast as he could to the top of the ocean were the fisherman were. Avery followed, but her skin was so shiny and her eyes so beautiful that all of the fisherman on the ocean saw her, they all were trying to catch her. She was trapped, the fisherman got her, they pulled her up, and she suffocated to death. But don’t worry Xerses was fine since he was a poisonous fish he was very ugly and no one human wanted to eat anything that ugly. They won the fish won! Xerses swam to go tell Ollie the news, but when he got there Ollie was dead, while the fish were dancing one had sneaked to Ollie’s house and killed him for telling on them. Xerses was very sad to loose a friend, but his kingdom was safe. Xerses ruled Katmandu for a very long time after that. All of the sharks were scared of Katmandu, they never had to lock the gate again.

__The End __

Dean Groom activity #2 The four hippopotamuses had just gotten back from their day at the spa when a herd of raging elephants, which had lost their teddy bears, ran into the barn, crying and screaming running back and forth to find their teddy bears where they had last seen them. Boston the moose made a sort of wall round them trapping them in the corner with his huge antlers, and the elephants screamed and cried even louder. At the last moment Jane, the tiny bunny rabbit who is known throughout the zoo, came blissfully in, carrying the teddy bears.

MIDDLE _ BEGINNING _ END Work Sheet start of your story. || * Introduce your characters: Xerses- king of Katmandu, he is a poisionous fish, so sharks can't eat him, very ugly Ollie- is an octupus who is Xerses right hand man, presasvive Sharks- evil Avery- leader of the sharks, very deciving and sneaky, has blue eyes, is beautiful, with razor aharp teeth - Murtle the grouchy old seaturtle Xerses- wants kingdom to be safe Ollie- wants gold Sharks- wan food Avery- wants food and to desroy Xerses so she can rule Katmandu Xerses- going to stay in katmandu Ollie- leaves once in a while to descuss with the sharks Sharks- go to katmandu but then get kicked out Avery- goes to katmandu with the sharks, but gets captured by sailor's || in the middle of your story? || * How will all your story and characters develop? Xerses- rule for many years to come Ollie- eventually gets eaten by the sharks Sharks- get kicked out Avery- gets captured by sailor's, beacuse of her beauty Ollie is a bad guy and dies. Avery dies. The Sharks become mean so the fish tell them to leave. They leave and plot a way to go and eat all of the fish. The fish will battle. || climax...How does the story end? || * Is your ending what your readers are expecting? I don' tthonk they expect Olllie to die. Saying that Ollie loved gold in the begining. ||
 * man's inhumanity to man may occur for the sake of political gain.
 * people who start out with the best intentions often fall into their own evil and pride.
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 * What do they want?
 * Where are they going?
 * What happens
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"No animal shall kill any other animal without cause."