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= My Mini Saga = Once upon a time there was a ferret named Quincy. He boasted about having the best chocolate in all of the animal kingdom. He would soon find out that maybe he wouldn't have the best chocolate. He will eventually be approached by a professional chef named Heffernan Kort. Read Now!

=__ Quincy's Chocolate by Carter Davenport __=

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Once in a wonderful place...the animals were walking throughout the fields and the children were running around and playing hop scotch. Ooo and life was amazing and just perfect… but that changed just as quickly, as it started. Back about 3 months ago the first ever billboard in the animal kingdom went up and it was titled “Quincy’s Chocolate”its slogan read “Best chocolate in the WORLD!”. All of the animal kingdom was stunned they all wanted to get some of this apparently amazing”Quincy’s Chocolate.” So quickly everyone rushed to get there share of the chocolate. Just as quickly as he made it it was gone. So most people said that it was as good even better than it was made out to be. Quincy denied the animals allegations saying “they all just say that cause they don't like me”. So he still thinks he makes the best chocolate in the world to this day. Soon he will taste the best chocolate in the world. Well I forgot to introduce myself my name is Heffernan Kort I'm from Russia (I'm a mouse) and you will come to know me later on in the story. Continuing, as Quincy was being bombarded with offers for more and more chocolate. He began to become over worked trying to keep up with everyone. So he decided that he is going to take the next week off and go on vacation to Hawaii with all the money he has earned which would become the worst come back home party ever. So as Friday rolled around he boarded that plane and flew to his private resort on Ni’ihau Hawaii. While he was having a great time back at home the rebels who had bought the most chocolate were planing a break in to steel the secret recipe for his AMAZING chocolate. The lead rebels name was George he was a henna and no one ever messed with him...EVER! He was a lean mean fighting machine and wasn’t afraid of anyone…yet! Well back to Quincy he just had got done surfing some 20 foot waves and got back to time share and he got a phone call it was about the rebels trying to break in. At first Quincy was petrified...then he thought i locked that place up tight and hid the secret recipe ware no one would ever find it. As he said that Mr. Muhammadan (the mayor) said they found the secret recipe and are holding it for ransom. He boarded a plane and was headed home faster than you could say Pneumonoultramicroscopicsilicovolcanoconiosis...just to tell you it took awhile. When he got to his Chocolate factory he noticed a note on the ground... It stated "we will be back ". At this point Quincy just wanted to go into a corner and cry and never stop and get up, but he knew he had to stand up for his chocolate factory. So lets just say he gave them there ransom money ad got his recipe. Everything was going good and life was great for 2 or 3 weeks. Then he got a complaint on his so called "best chocolate in the WORLD!" and the guy said (me) I make the best chocolate in the world you are a lire. I challenge you to a chocolate face-off! Well stunned Quincy agreed and i had a long flight to the Americas. While on the way here I was testing a new recipe in my private falcon yes i tamed him myself and i think this will give me the edge. Well here i am now 2 hours before the face-off I'm very nervous and don't know if I'm ready for this. I'm on my way to the competition right now I'm shaking like crazy and willing to do this now. Well i just met the judges 650 the 1st judge is Garthuncal the duck, the second judge Abigale the lady bug and 3rd Chuck Morris the bear. we put our chocolate on a plate named A and B and the judges are going to pick which is better (A is Quincey's and B is mine). First Garthuncal he chooses drum role A... I'm stunned and about to cry and Quincy's next to me boasting. Second drum role Abigale says B is better. "Yes" I think to myself. Last Chuck Morris he is deciding and thinking and he doesn't know yet (this felt like 10 hours)he chooooooooooooooosesssssssssss...............A! Quincy is freaking out and I walk over to him a shake his hand and tell him"it was a pleasure". He agrees and continues. That's how my story ends i guess..Ta ta till next time. **The End**

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 * Describe the start of your story. || * Introduce your characters: Quincy the ferret and


 * What do they want?


 * Where are they going? ||
 * What happens in the middle of your story? || * How will all your story and characters develop?


 * Plot Twists and Turns?


 * How will you lead up to the climax? ||
 * Outline the climax...How does the story end? || * Is your ending what your readers are expecting?


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