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The Doctor stepped out of the TARDIS and smelled the air. "It like Daleks." he said. Which Amy thought was a very strange thing to say, because Daleks are metal. So she asked him "Doctor, how can you smell them if there made of metal?" He said "There cologne".

Utopian Conspiracy By Victor Fulcher





 The TARDIS crashed down on a hut made of sticks and mud. After a few minutes, the Doctor and Amy stepped outside. They looked around and Amy said "When or where are we, Doctor?" To that the Doctor looked puzzled. He said, "We're right where we should be...but in the year 2098." "Why are we here?" said Amy. "Well the TARDIS must have brought us here for some reason." ,the Doctor replied. "RORY!!!" Amy cried out. "What, what, what! I'm right here!" Rory said, backing out of the TARDIS coughing, and releasing smoke from its doors. "Rory! We're in the year 2090!" Amy said frantically. "2098." The Doctor corrected. "What ever!!! Were stuck in the year 2098 and we can't get home!!!" The Doctor looked at Rory. "Amy, calm down. The TARDIS will fix its self in 5 hours. Then we can get home." The Doctor said reassuringly. Then they decided to walk around and explore. They found a group of people that didn't exactly greet them with open arms. They pointed their weapons at the Doctor and his companions.  After the Doctor explained who he was, the leader of the group expressed his apologies and explained that he was a leader of a rebellion against the Utopian society that they were trapped in. The stories he told of the “utopia” were horrifying.  He explained to Amy and Rory that there was no leader in there world. After the long conversation with the rebel leader the Doctor asked if they could help in any way. “Actually, there is something you could do for us.” The rebel leader stated. The Doctor, Amy, and Rory were housed with the rebels for the night. Seeing as it was getting dark and they were going to help them anyway, the rebel leader thought nothing of them staying with them through the night.  The next morning after resting they were given there task and set forth on completing it. They were to travel north to the Capital, where they would encounter the Balancers. They were told that the Balancers were a group of citizen that had been tasked, by some higher power, with keeping the utopia working smoothly. The Doctor questioned who the higher power was and was not given a direct answer. The answer he received was in the form of a riddle:

//The Highest is closest to the ground.//  The Doctor figured it out almost immediately, but in true Doctor fashion he lets Amy and Rory learn a lesson and figure it out on there own. When they finally arrived at the Balancers, they noticed that there was a great hall that the Balancers had once conversed and had scattered around making plans for a better tomorrow. But today there was no one to be found! The hall was completely deserted. The Doctor rubbed his finger on a dusty lamp and licked his finger. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">“Gone about….20 years or so, Id say.” he proclaimed. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">“But Doctor, how is that possible?” Asked Rory. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">“Its not. This means that someone….or something…has taken the Balancers place as the balancers of this, so called utopia.”, Said the Doctor. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;"> After many more questions and very few answers they left the Balancers hall and went back to the Rebel camp. They told the Rebel leader what they had discovered and his was appalled. “But how can this be!”, He cried out “ I had just heard them speak yesterday. They put out a new set of rules of conduct.” <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">“Rules of conduct?” <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">“Yes, the rules we all abide by when it comes to being in public.” <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;"> “Well it sounds like you don’t have much of a utopia here. Its more like a dictatorship.” said Amy. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">“Well, dictatorship is a little over dramatic. Its more like a….a ‘flawed utopia’.” the leader replied. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">“Aren’t you supposed to be against the utopian society? That is what your rebelling against, right? Because it sounds like you are defending it. ” Rory asked. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">“Yes, but we aren’t….well no actually.” The leader said. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">“You’re the Balancers aren’t you?” said the Doctor. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">“Well not exactly. We're the people who balance the Balancers.” the leader said. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">“And the riddle of who controlled and set forth the task for the Balancers was you guys?” Amy asked. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">“No. Think about the riddle. The Highest is closest to the ground. What stands closest to the ground?” the Doctor replied. Amy and Rory both thought about the riddle. Then Rory figured it out. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">“Children! Children stand closest to the ground!” he exclaimed. Then the leader yelled, “Hrothgar!” and a child walked up and introduced himself. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">“I am Hrothgar. The leader of this “utopia”. The people that aren’t my friends can call me High Hrothgar, but my friends get to call me Hrothie.” <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">“That had absolutely nothing to do with what we want to talk about.”, said Amy. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">“Well then what do you want to know?” Hrothgar asked. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">“We want to know why you haven’t just come out and say you’re the leader of this place. Its obviously not a utopia so why are you still running it like one?” asked the Doctor. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">“Well, do not imagine that leadership is a pleasure. On the contrary, it is a deep and heavy responsibility. I would be only too happy to let them make their decisions for them selves. But sometimes they might make the wrong decisions and then where should we be? Because people work more when they think that they work for themselves, then they even willingly give there time and effort to keep the government away and except the rules our puppet heads, the Balancers, provide if it means that they keep there 'utopia'." Hrothgar explained. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">“You are a very clever for a child, Hrothgar. But, I can't stand idly by, while you trick your people. We will have to do something about your position in power.”, the Doctor said calmly. “We will let you be in power if you tell your subjects your ruling them.”, the Doctor offered. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;"> “You know I cant do that, Doctor.” <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">“Well you will have to if you wish to remain in power.” <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">“Ah, but what you don’t realize is that I don’t.” said Hrothgar. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">“Then we will let the people try a utopian society and if it doesn’t work you can swoop in and take control from behind your puppets again.” offered the Doctor. Hrothgar accepted his terms and there was a mutual agreement. The Doctor, Amy, and Rory then went back to the TARDIS and went back to their own time….or did they?

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 * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Describe the start of your story. || * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Introduce your characters: The Doctor, Amy, Rory


 * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">What do they want? To get back to there time.


 * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Where are they going? To a strange planet that is suppose to be a utopia ||
 * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">What happens in the middle of your story? || * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">How will all your story and characters develop? They find out that the utopia is flawed and try to fix it.


 * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Plot Twists and Turns? Is flawed on purpose. Government says there cant be a real utopia


 * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">How will you lead up to the climax? Talk to the government and find out that there right about the utopia. So they overthrow the "Leaders" and let the people create there own government. ||
 * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Outline the climax...How does the story end? || * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Is your ending what your readers are expecting? No, I'm trying to think as Stephen Moffat would think. He writes weird endings and stories that you don't see coming.


 * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Have you used foreshadowing throughout your story? Maybe . ||

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The 3 Dovahkiins had just finished banishing Alduin forward in time using the Elder Scroll, when a brood of ducklings, which had witnessed the fight, filed forward to the top of Throat of the World, cheeping hardily and stumbling from the winds to find some place where they could take shelter from the dragons. Paarthonox made a sort of wall round them with his great foreleg, and the ducklings nestled down inside it and promptly fell asleep. At the last moment Sjorn, the foolish, petty Nord drew drew his bow and fired a shot at Paarthonox, chewing at a lump of sugar.



<span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">MIDDLE _ BEGINNING _ END Work Sheet My mini saga

When he was a boy, he always favored cheese pizza. But now that he has grown, his taste for pizza has shifted. He now favored the supreme. He never thought he would like mushrooms and all that stuffon a pizza. He finds it remarkably flavorful. He's name was John.

Emma Loney

Resolutions: - Collect more coco beans - Play more Skyrim - Make horses that don't attack you when you shoot them with an arrow - Make more "Then I took an arrow in the knee" jokes - Make people halo jump in real life