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Cassie and Katy have the worst job in the palace: working for a Evil, Treacherous Queen. Every day they are whipped, starved, and deprived of sleep. Although life in the palace is hard, they are about to experience a worse life ahead of them.....

Cassie was born in 1919 to Jeffry and Susan. At the age of four, Cassie began to work for the palace. Her life was very hard. Sadly, at the age of eight, Cassie's parents died in an explosion where they worked. Cassie was sent to live at the palace where she met Katy, whom * parents left her when she was just two years old.

They quickly became friends. Together, they made a plan: When we are older, we will escape the palace and go to the United States of America.

Years passed. Cassie and Katy were now 15 years old. They were fed up with the Evil Queen. She had worked them much too hard. One Day, she made them scrub the whole palace (even the dungeon) with toothbrushes in no more than 2 hours. This was the last straw. One night, after work, they went to their rooms and promptly fell asleep. Cassie awoke abruptly to Katy. * It was their cue. Tonight was their night. Whatever happened tonight they would hold in their hearts forever. Cassie crept out of bed, grabbed her things, and left. Katy did the same. They exchanged close glances in the dark and never looked back again.

In the wilderness, life was hard. They had to work for their food, water, and shelter. Often, they went for days without food or water. Luckily, they had one another to hold on to. For once, Cassie was happy. She didn't have to do anything for someone else. She felt at home. One day, Katy decided she wanted to play the role of boss. Cassie had to get Katy's food, water, blankets, and make sure Katy was happy. Cassie was promised to play the role the next day, however, Katy wanted the role again. Each day, Katy was the "boss," and Cassie had to tend to anything Katy wanted, and was promised she would get to play the role of "boss" the next day. Each day, Katy's chores got significantly worse.

Now, Cassie had lost hope that someday she would get to play the role of "Boss". In fact, it wasn't a role anymore. Now Katy was abusing Cassie just as the Evil Queen once did. She now felt trapped. One cold, winter day, Cassie slipped and fell on the ice. She felt a burning sensation in her arm, and she could not work for Katy anymore that day. Katy got really upset and left. Just like that she was gone!

Alone and upset, and confused, Cassie wept.. For three days straight, Cassie wept. She missed the old Katy. The Katy that she could turn to with her problems. The Katy that was always there for her. Whatever happened to THAT Katy?

Cassie followed her instincts, and went North. There she saw a figure in the shadows. Scared for her life, she ran, and ran, and ran for her dear life. Much to her surprise, It was a woman. She formally introduced herself as Maria, the doctor. When she saw Cassie's swollen arm, she gasped. Cassie explained what had happened to her arm, why she was here alone in the wilderness, and how Katy had betrayed her deeply.

For days, they walked. Each day, the pain in Cassie's arm worsened, but she kept up with her new friend, Maria. Even if it hurt them, they kept walking. two months later, they reached the United States. For Cassie, it was a dream come true. She had come to the United States with a friend- even if it wasn't the friend she expected to come with.

The first thing they did was go to the doctor. The doctor pronounce that her arm was broken, and asked how she had been living with a broken arm for two months. Cassie didn't know how she did it, but she sure was glad she was getting some medical attention on her arm.

Maria had come to the forest to escape her life, but instead found new hope. She adopted Cassie as her own daughter just days after they had arrived in the United States. Now Cassie was very happy. She had found a loving family and regained her freedom.