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The two brothers making the most noise didn't realize is that they were driving the teacher insane. She started to huff and puff. Then all of the sudden the teacher screeched! ALL except the twobrERE SILENT. She them up and dropped them off in the desert.
 * Mini-Saga**



__**Corruption**__
 * By**
 * Craig Garfield**

“The truth shall be revealed!” These were the last words I heard from my brother. Before he went to the jail that is. He was accused of murdering the royal Taylor. I know it’s not true, But why would they say he did it? he is such a nice guy. He is also a good role model. Unlike the king. I have to find out what’s going on.. He and I have to go to the capitol. Meanwhile in the jail his brother John had his own problems. He was to be executed. Of course he couldn’t tell his brother. His other option was to break out and reveal the truth. He would have to obtain some materials first. So he wrote to his brother who was packing to go to the capitol. He asked for few small things a sword, file, and some shoes. It just happend to be his birthday tomorrow. So Chance could just bring them all in a cake. The king however was in the capitol giving one of his famous speeches. All about the sudden disappearances. Of course he blamed it on John. John was his new scapegoat. He would go on to say John had people hired to kill even when he was in prison. He had already killed the Taylor. He wouldn’t think twice about killing your loved ones. That’s the only thing the king could think of he knew that john hadn’t killed that Taylor was in too deep he had killed the king and blamed it on john, and then he had killed the people in a fire. Blacksmith and lastly he had killed several. It was now tomorrow John would see his brother and get out. The king would sleep in until 4:00.Then the two boys would be off to the capitol. When Chance arrived at the prison he saw his brother his face had been damaged. He asked what had happened but John wouldn’t answer. He had brought the cake as promised. The only thing he had forgotten was the shoes. The brothers talked for an hour they decided to meet out back of the jail at 2:00 A.M. About 10 hours later the plan went into action. He had filed away the bars on the windows and squeezed out ever so slightly. The next morning he when he wasn’t there, the king was notified. The king sent a group of knights to find and kill him. He addressed the city again saying his John was responsible for their entire problem and was now on the loose. He said that John was ready to kill anyone and was extremely dangerous. The city was in an up roar and some started to think. They thought that they could blame everything on John and his men who didn’t exist. The city which had once been known as a utopia was in shambles. Everyone was stealing and killing people, and just saying it was John or his guys. Some would even say they saw him. When of course he was miles and miles away walking getting ready to reveal the kings plan and or plot. The next day when John and Chance were walking through the town of Gathfer. They spotted the royal chariot and horses. They had to figure away to get past the chariot and decided to go around them to the wood. When they arrived in the woods chance over hear the king making commandments. Chance immediately knew what was going to happen in the capitol. He was going to enslave their minds. Chance knew they were going to have to get there faster. When he told John he freaked out he started to worry and then he did the unthinkable. He went over to a Man knocked him out and stole his horse. Chance was appalled at what he had just witnessed, but he didn’t question his brother why would he. He never had too before. John picked him up and placed him on saddle. They were now headed to the capitol. The brothers arrived at dusk. The next step was for them to sneak in to the castle. Secretly Chance had organized a conference to reveal the kings evil plot to enslave the entire city. Chance also gave the idea for them to split up. Both agreed to the plan and, John went to the east tower of the castle. Chance headed to the main doors where many citizens were starting to gather. John arrived and snick in he head for the throne. That’s where the king should be. He was right but his brother was there too. His brother had been captured in the beginning of his speech. Filled with rage john ran over to the king and started to beat him. He was pulled off and thrown up against the wall. Then the king walked over to him and smiled. He whispered “You think you can stop me? You foolish, foolish man.” Then John burst out of the guards clutches. The king ordered him to stop or his brother would be killed. “You touch him and I will kill you!” screamed John. The king turned to walk away when john attacked again. “That’s the last straw…kill him” ordered the king. The guard did as ordered and killed Chance. John ran over to his dying brother and grabbed him. “Chance! Chance! you can't die. you can get through this, we can go get you fixed up.” John said. “No brother… this is the end. But remember The citizens of this town have no consistency or loyalty to an individual. Their lack of intelligence or memory prevents it. They are the perfect pawns for a corrupt leader like the king.” Explained chance. Then he died. John knew what to do. He picked up his sword and ran after the king. When the king turned around John stabbed him. That was the last of the king. Guards arrived and looked at John. They didn’t even think twice the killed John. Nobody ever found out about the corrupt king. John died in vain. The small country is now being run by a new leader and is doing quite well.

The End.

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 * Describe the start of your story. || * Introduce your characters:Chance,John ,Evil ruler fandor
 * What do they want?John wants his city to belive him
 * chance wants his brother back. ruler want complete control
 * chance wants his brother back. ruler want complete control

Where are they going?Jhon is going back to his home from jail Chance is going to the capitol ruler is staying. || The brother will write a journal entry abouit ht e day then his brother gets jailed
 * What happens in the middle of your story? || How will all your story and characters develop?

the king did the crime
 * Plot Twists and Turns?
 * How will you lead up to the climax?
 * John will arrive to attack the knig while chance is talking to the press ||
 * Outline the climax...How does the story end? || <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Is your ending what your readers are expecting?


 * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Have you used foreshadowing throughout your story
 * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">no ||