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//MINI SAGA!// As the darkness clouded my mind, i could feel myself slipping into unconsciousness. Suddenly a sensation so cold it burned, over-came my body and i was thrust out of the water. A beautiful, fiery, creature stood over me. She had golden feathers that were set ablaze at the ends.

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by: Jordan Kay Milledge



This is all i remember from my time alive... I want others to know my story.

As the darkness clouded my mind, i could feel myself slipping into unconsciousness. Suddenly a sensation so cold it burned, over-came my body and i was thrust out of the water. A beautiful, fiery, creature stood over me. She had golden feathers that were set ablaze at the ends.

"Xenon, are you alive???? Speak to me!!" yelled the Phoenix that I had come to know as Ember.

"Yeah, I'm fine. Thanks." that was all I could manage to say before I starting cough up water and some blood I think. My jet black hair shined in the moonlight and was dripping wet. "What happened to me?" I asked confused.

"Neo happened...... someone ratted on you for your art and he had sentenced you to die that the hands of the serpent."

I became demented,enraged, and then I screamed "THAT'S IT!!!! I'm done being a slave! Neo is going to pay for thousands of years of enslavement!!!"

Neo was an old, frightening, dark green dragon. He ruled all and was the only dragon left that belonged to all four elements. His weakest element was fire, therefore he needed to find a fire dragon to mate and create his heir. There were so few fire females that could be found so for now, we were safe from another ruler as ruthless as he. He had enslaved us human-like creatures and used us as slaves. I am a witch, really I'm a Wicca but that doesn't matter to them, were all the same. Neo forbid slaves any creativity and if any free- thinking if found and can be proven, they will be sentenced to death. He also created the Burning Claw, which was a society of Phoenix and Dragons to rule us. all other creatures were free to do as they please as long as they do not interact with slaves. Ember was Neo's most trusted adviser but she finally saw what he was doing was wrong and stood up to Neo but he cut her down and was sent to life as a slave.

"What!? Your insane!!!!!! How can you take down NEO!?" She screamed at me hoping to jog sense back into my deranged mind.

"I'm starting my own society, the Rebels Strike. If you'll help, we will take back our lost freedom! I will talk to the other slaves, convince them to strike back, make a plan, and go into battle to take him down!"

"No, I can't let you do this Xenon. he WILL kill you, I won't let you die for this stupid idea!!!!" Ember yelled as I walked back home, I knew she was worried about me but she also feared what would happen if we would succeed.

"Try to stop me." and the conversation ended.

Morning came and I started working the day away. The only expression Neo allowed was music to play as we work. I tended to the caves for awhile then went to go mine til' dusk. Once the moon hung and the stars shimmered, Rebel Strike finally met. One room filled with slaves, candles everywhere to illuminate the darkness. With the soothing aroma of the Earth, we starting the meeting.

"Misters and Mistress of magic!! I call you here tonight to discuss one thing, Freedom! Neo has controlled us and our ancestors for thousands of years so i say we take back what was long forgotten!!!" Cheers filled the room and I smiled at my fellow magicians, "Calm yourselves, we need the perfect day and plan to strike. In three months the annual cycle will begin, Neo will sleep for one week and wake at the end of the new moon. That is when we strike, when he is weak and just awoken. He will die as will the rest of his precious society." Ember was in the corner with a twisted look on her face, as if she was still with Neo. She soon cheered with excitement as did the others.

Over the course of the next 3 months we worked to collect weapons, allies, and other supplies for our rebellion. I made friends with a guard of Neo's, he was a blue water dragon and guarded Neo's chambers. He would allow access into the hollow he slept in once he awoke.

<span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">The day had finally come and we were ready to rid ourselves of that hellish ruler forever.

<span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">The water dragon whispered to me, "Kill the devil" and we charged.The guards attacked but we cut them down with ease, next were the society members and they died fighting nobly for most but some were just pathetic begging for mercy. The bloody battle was short but felt like an eternity moving through all the insanity. Last was the Devil's dragon, Neo. My fellow rebels all voted on who was to kill Neo and they decided it to be me, even the once loyal, royal, beasts agreed. Neo had no clue, that his perfect little world was being hacked away, as his peaceful sleep was undisturbed. I went to strike with my blood-stained blade but he got me first, his claws were digging in my throat and I was dying fast. I felt the warm blood on my neck and the pain was so intense that it was close to pleasure. He released me and i dropped onto the stone floor, blood was spilling from my mouth and I could get the smallest amount of breath just enough to cling to my life. I barely managed to lift my head in my last moments of life to see my killer, but instead I saw Ember fighting the horrid beast and she was winning! He advantage didn't last her long so I come in from behind and stabbed his leg, taller than me, covered in scales. He shrieks turns to me but his neck met my blade before he could make a killing blow. We had done it, Neo was dead and the slaves were free!

<span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">It was long over-due but we were free and everyone treated us like normal "people". My wounds healed with a little magic, fire and water. I died anyway though, my spirit claimed by death and Ember went on to rule for sometime, but after a century or two, Ember became as corrupt as Neo had been. She was the Devil's Daughter and nobody dare challenge her. I suppose that's the cycle and nobody can change it forever. Human-like creatures were slaves once more and she only had dragons serve her, she dare not enslave or use her own kind. The End and not so happily ever after.

MIDDLE _ BEGINNING _ END Work Sheet Xenon- witch(Main character) Ember-phoenix Neo- elemental dragon The "humans" to be free of the creatures that rule them (humans- witches, warlocks, wizards Creatures- Dragons, Phoenix ect.) Ember will become more rebellious Ember becomes Neo secret "rebel strike" society || peace and happiness, no more cruelty
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