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My Mini Saga The two polar bears were very hungry. They were craving rainbow trout, but sadly there was a report there were none left in their area. They went to find some, and instead they ran into a cheetah! She seemed nice... after a while she changed. The bears got very mad...

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Tayli Lomas




Way down in the cold barren land of the Arctic Circle there were two polar bears. They have been friends for so long. They did everything together! Back when they were younger, they went on tons of adventures exploring the land. Patty was always kind of the leader. She was the one to say where they should go next, or what they should do. She wasn't exactly bossy, she just liked to be the one to decide things. Now that they are older, they argue more.

It was late one night, and Patty and Paul were out walking around. It was a warm day and they had been wandering around because they had nothing else to do, and they realized they were hungry. They went out to find some food. See, the thing was that these polar bears weren't very good swimmers. They could definitely swim, just not very well. As they walked over toward the water, they talked about what they wanted to eat. Patty said she wanted ringed seal, but Paul said he wanted bearded seal. They were really getting into an argument, when Chloe the cheetah came in. Chloe was accidentally placed in the Arctic Circle, but adapted and is living just well. "Would you two stop fighting about something so dumb and just go get your food?" She said. The polar bears looked at each other for a moment and decided it was best to listen to what she said.

Patty, Paul and Chloe all just thought it was best to find some fish. They all really enjoyed rainbow trout (although it had taken Chloe a while to learn to like fish), and they went off to find some. The bears swam around a bit but didn't find any. They about gave up hope when Chloe surprisingly spoke up while she was admiring herself in the crystal clear water. "Hey look, there is something colorful swimming around that iceberg over there." The bears looked over and saw she was right... it was a rainbow trout! They were so excited but then when they were saying how to get over there, Patty and Paul had different ideas. Patty said they could find their way around, while Paul thought they could swim. Chloe just stared into the water oblivious of the disagreement. Patty started to walk around the land, and Chloe looked up, saw her walking, and followed along. Paul didn't want to be left alone so he followed too. "Not everything needs to go your way Patty." said Paul a little angrily. Patty stopped in her tracks, stared him in the eye, and said "Oh, and I suppose you have a better idea?" Paul was appalled at this and soon yelling broke out. Chloe wasn't sure what to do so she laid down and licked her paws.

Paul had won the argument. It seemed like lately he won a lot. //" Maybe finally I can start telling Patty what to do. It will be my turn to be boss."// Paul thought. Patty fell silent for a while, deep in thought while reluctantly following behind Paul. Paul took this as a sign of forfeit and took a step up as leader. "From now on, you will listen to and do what I say. For I am older and stronger, and I believe I have the right to lead." Nobody said anything. Only a couple of snickers and glares from Patty. They swam a ways and climbed up onto an iceberg. They were halfway there, but very tired. Patty told Paul that they would rest for a while, then continue across. Paul did not like this, and said " No. We will go forth. If you are too tired then stay behind, but you will not be welcome to share the fish." Chloe did not care, and was tired of the fighting. She wanted to go back, brush her fur, get any other fish, and go to sleep. Patty continued on with Paul. All was well until they were on an iceberg that was small, bumpy, and slippery. Patty did not like it and told Paul how dangerous his idea was and they should have done what she said. At this Paul said "I am the leader, and I will make the decisions. You will follow or be punished."

Patty thought hard about this and did not like it. She figured she might as well wait until they got to the fish, before she said anything more. Before they knew it they were on the iceberg where the fish was. Patty reached down, and scooped it up in her mouth. "What on earth do you think you're doing?" exclaimed Paul. "I simply grabbed the fish out for you and I to share." replied Patty. Paul stated he deserved more for the the reason that they got there because of him. Patty thought that was absurd and they began another argument. There were faint cracking noises, but they couldn't hear them. They were much to loud. A part of the iceberg broke off all of a sudden, which got their attention. They jumped back as another part broke off. Before they knew it, they were in the water. They looked at one another and Paul blamed it on Patty for picking up the fish in the first place. "I thought all animals were equal Paul! I should get my fair share of fish." Patty said. "All animals are equal but some are more equal than others." Paul replied a little out of breath from being in the water.

When they got back to land, Paul seemed to take charge of not just Patty, but all the other animals. The penguins got treated okay, but things weren't as good as they used to be. Paul had them fetch him food and do things for him and many of the other bears. All of the other animals were pretty much his servants, and if they didn't do something in time, or they didn't do something right, he would order for them to be executed. Whenever somebody asked he would simply reply "all animals are equal but some are more equal than others." THE END

DeanGroom Activity 2

The two polar bears had just moved to another iceberg when a group of leopard seals, which hadn't eaten in days, surrounded the iceberg, squealing feebly and swimming furiously around to scare the polar bears so they could finally eat. Paul made a sort of nervous but mad look and jumped at the seals. The seals backed off, and at the last moment Patty, the cowardly, fluffy young polar bear who looked up to Paul, decided she was hungry and jumped in the water, happy the seals were gone, and went to find some fish. ``

STORY IN A WEEK Tales of Utopia

Mini Saga

Chloe the cheetah needed some tape. Her comb broke while brushing her fur. She cried because only half her fur was brushed. She went to go find some tape, but instead she ran into a huge dinosaur.The dinosaur was angry so he chased her to the end of a cliff...

The two polar bears were very hungry. They were craving rainbow trout, but sadly there was a report there were none left in their area. They went to find some, and instead they ran into a cheetah! She seemed nice... after a while she changed. The bears got very mad...

MIDDLE _ BEGINNING _ END Work Sheet

Patty, Paul, and Chloe The last rainbow trout on the other iceberg In Antarctica to get to the other iceberg || They will start to argue and Paul will take over while Chloe doesn't help at all Paul will start being mean and making others do the work, Chloe is really self centered, the iceberg starts to break and they need to get along The iceberg will break, so they all need to start getting along or they will fall in the water and freeze || NOPE AF Quote: "all animals are equal but some are more equal than others"
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