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The seven trout had just swam up the river when a swarm of pike, which had lost their root beer, doggie-paddled out of the current, feebly wandering to the side to where the trout were. The trout would not be trodden on without consequences. Phil,the leader, made a sort of wall round them with his body, and the trout nestled down inside it and promptly went into attack position. At the last moment,Bill the foolish,buff pike, who lost the root beer, came swimming fiercely in, chewing at a lump of coal.

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mini saga The storm hit and it was a hurricane. A battle of epic proportions took place, but in the end Tom lost. The animal control came and arrested Tom and Sent Joe and Stan back home. Phil was sent to a  nice  zoo where he was visited by Stan and Joe .

"Hurricane Tom" By: Jesse Hatler



It was a cold, stormy, night on the beach when the hurricane rolled in. The mouse knew that everything was going according to plan. Soon the world would be his! He started thinking about his brilliant plan that got him to this point. It started with him in a mansion. He was just sitting there when all of a sudden a bunch of little green pills rolled into his mouse hole. He was quite angry that that these people were trying to get rid of him. He was a very smart mouse and knew that those pills were poison so he kept a couple and hid them away and put the rest outside his hole. He went into the little boy’s room and saw that the boy was asleep. He took one pill and put it in his mouth to make him sick. When the parents saw that their boy was sick they decided to take him to the beach so that the fresh air would make him feel better. The mouse snuck along in the trunk.

Meanwhile a dog named Joe was on a farm when his master told him to jump into the truck with him because they were going to the beach. The dog was extremely happy because there was a cat whom lived next door that was always bugging him to be friends. The dog wanted to be friends with the cat too. The dog and cat, whose name was Stan, had a secret piece of paper that they each had a copy of and it was a treaty for the two of them. They called it their ice cream. When the dog wasn’t looking Stan jumped in the tailgate of the truck. He wanted to go to the beach too.

Somewhere not far from the beach a freighter was pulling up to some docks. The freighter was driven by poachers who had just caught an African elephant. They had gotten a really good deal and were unloading him from some huge shipping crates when he made a run for it. The poachers did not react fast enough and he got away. The elephant, named Phil, ran and ran until he got to some hot sand and fell asleep. The hot sand was of course the beach.

About Three-fourths of the way through the trip to the beach Joe saw Stan, but couldn’t send him back. When they got to the beach Stan and Joe snuck off to go swim. Tom, the mouse had the same idea. He could start his plan there. Phil decided that the water looked nice and jumped of the pier and did a cannonball into the ocean. Tom saw the huge splash and decided that he needed a big animal on his side. Therefore he went over to the pier to either convince him to come on his side or capture him. When Tom found out that Phil had made the splash and that Phil was an elephant he knew that he would have no trouble scaring Phil into helping him. Phil was just a giant puppet for him.

Later, Joe and Stan met up with Tom at the ice cream stand. All of a sudden a giant elephant jumped out and scared them. They were frightened and ran away. The giant elephant, which happened to be Phil, did not bug them anymore for an hour or so, but he was scaring or playing jokes on everyone. Some wallets and other items had gone missing and everyone was blaming it all on Phil..A few people had called animal control and they would not be there for a few hours.

Some of the lifeguards at the beach noticed some menacing storm clouds gathering. There were all the signs of a big storm, Warm winds, rain and black sky. Suddenly Joe’s and Stan’s bags started to blow away. They both were yelling for Phil to grab them. He did, but he grabbed out their ice cream and put it in his bag. For the first time everyone saw that Phil might be dangerous, for he charged a lifeguard stand and it toppled. Phil ran into the guard hut and grabbed the paper that would allow him to become the owner of the beach. On the way out there was a note that said to get Joe and Stan off of the beach so he wouldn’t have any trouble. The signature was to small to read, but Phil was sure it said Tom. He ran out and said that it was never him. Tom was making him do all the stuff and blaming it all on him. All of a sudden he threw the bag with the papers at Tom to stop him. Tom just grabbed a paper and signed it. Stan and Joe Know what had happened and grabbed the bag before Tom realized he had signed the wrong paper. The storm hit and it was a hurricane. A battle of epic proportions took place, but in the end Tom lost. The animal control came and arrested Tom and Sent Joe and Stan back home. Phil was sent to a zoo where he was visited by Stan and Joe a lot. Tom spent the rest of his days thinking about what might have been.

The End

MIDDLE _ BEGINNING _ END Work Sheet

My characters are Stan, a cat, Joe, a dog, and Tom, a mouse. an evil elephant (Phil)who wants to rule the world but has to take over the beach first. Joe wants to be friends with Stan, Stan wants to be friends with Tom and Tom wants to blame all his problems on Joe. Phil wants to rule the world. They start at a mansion, farm and a bungalow where all of there owners go to the beach. ey meet Phil there. Phil is good but controlled secretly by Tom. The ending is very surprising.
 * Describe the start of your story. || * Introduce your characters:
 * What do they want?
 * Where are they going? They are going to the beach. ||
 * What happens in the middle of your story? || * How will all your story and characters develop?
 * Plot Twists and Turns?
 * How will you lead up to the climax?The will all fight in a hurricane. ||
 * Outline the climax...How does the story end? || * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Is your ending what your readers are expecting?
 * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Have you used foreshadowing throughout your story? Yes, i have because Phil is scared of Tom. ||