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//** My mini saga- **//The four girls ran from the evil. The skinwalkers were after them. The girls ran into the church only to be found face to face with a blood stealer. The youngest girl shot a sliver bullet straight through the skinwalker. Now...they just needed to take care of the vampires....


 * Whitechapel: A town of mystery**
 * By: Natalie Avanzo**

Whitechapel, Oregon used to be the town where everyone could have fun in…now it is the town everyone feared. All thanks to those skinwalkers and blood stealers. They revealed themselves to the town not too long ago…shocking everyone, but they were not as shocked as when the tried to take over the town. They killed…or rather murdered…100’s…even 1,000’s of humans and battled each other for control.

A young girl named Tiffany, at just 13 years old, was desperately bored one gloomy Saturday afternoon when she decided to call her friend Maddie. She was in the middle of sharing a story about the horror movie she saw last night when her other friend Ashley, called interrupting. “Turn on the T.V.!” she shouted. “Um…ok what channel?” Tiffany replied. Ashley shouted, “27…and HURRY!” Maddie shook her head rubbing her ear. “I think you blew my ear drum.” she said. Setting down the phone not in the mood to hear her friends fight, she moved the banana sucker in her mouth from her left cheek to her right grabbing her remote and her pet hobo spider named Samantha she sat upside down on her bed. She put her spider on her chest and turned on her SpongeBob Squarepants television to channel 27, and picked at a sticker on the remote which said “I LOVE ZOMBIES”.

“I am Bruce Scollcik for Channel 27 news. Today downtown, a…um…very strange man came forward to Whitechapel and said he was a blood stealer or vampire and then approximately 3 minutes later, a very…..strange woman came forward and said she was a skinwalker or werewolf. Things in Whitechapel are surely aren’t what they seem. Now to Courtney Tankan with last night’s sports highlights.” Tiffany, after throwing her sucker stick away, picked the phone up again. “Ash…you there?” Ashley nodded her head to no one in particular. “I’M HERE!” she said rather excitedly. “Me too.” Said Maddie. “Didn’t it blow your mind?!?” Ashley asked. “Pretty much.” Maddie said. “I think it’s fake.” Said Tiffany. “Nothing like that REALLY happens…” Ashley looked puzzled. “What are you talking about? They have all the evidence they need right there on that recording.” She said quite proud of herself. “It’s a hoax…” Tiffany replied. “End of story.”

“If you think it’s such a hoax…” Ashley started. “You wouldn’t mind helping me prove it’s real.” Tiffany looked at her. “Why would I help prove something I don’t believe?” she said. “Because you’re afraid!” Ashley replied. “Sure…THAT’S it.” Tiffany said with sarcasm in her voice. “I’m in!” Maddie said. “PLEASE TIFF?” Ashley begged. “Okay, fine. I give….but only to prove you wrong.” “I’ll be over in 10!” Ashley said. “Me Too!” Maddie replied and hung up. “Grrr.” Tiffany mumbled to herself. She put Samantha in her tank and quick cleaned her room, which meant throwing everything in her closet. “Hey.” Ashley said making herself at home. “HI.” Maddie said sitting in Tiffany’s lime green beanbag. “Okay…” Ashley said showing the girls her rather complicated plan. Ashley’s mom had been planning a trip to Transylvania for a while…and she wanted the girls to come too. They begged their parents to allow them to go. They would be gone for about 2 months and the trip started in 3, and in that little amount of time…their whole world would change.

In one month, the blood stealers took over the town proving they were real by killing a woman standing nearby. The girls changed their plan from trying to prove them, to trying to stop them. They went to Transylvania looking for cures, repellents and antidotes for both blood stealers, and skinwalkers.

When in Transylvania, the girls couldn’t imagine what was going on in Whitechapel. “Why don’t you kids go to the mall?” Ashley’s mom said. “Okay…” Ashley said. We walked to the mall and Ashley’s brother went elsewhere. “Okay…we need to find….” She lowered her voice. “LOOK! 100% sterling silver!” Ashley held up a bracelet. “Great…were gonna buy them jewelry?” Ashley frowned. “NO! We could melt it and turn it into a silver bullet! My brother could do it easy! “She turned around bumping into someone. “WHAT are you doing?” the girl said anger in her voice. She had long black hair, and expensive looking clothes. “SORRY!” Ashley said. “I’m Ashley.” The girl looked at her nails. “Rosie.” She said. “Maybe we should go…” Maddie said. “Wh-Wh-What about the bracelet?” Ashley said. “I’ll give you $25…that’s all I have.” Tiffany said to Ashley. “I’ve got $42.” Maddie said. “And I’ve got $36! And the bracelet is $100! We have just enough!” Tiffany looked at her. “That’s our money for lunch.” Maddie joined in. “Yeah and now we only have $3 left.” Ashley looked disappointed. “Com’mon you guy! We can eat at the hotel! PLEASE!” The girls looked at each other. “Fine.” They said together and handed over the money.

After Ashley’s brother melted the bracelet, the trip was just about over…until the attack. The girl they met at the mall was there…and in trouble. “QUICK! OVER HERE!” Ashley shouted to her. Rosie quickly did as she was told. Tiffany was about to get bitten by a skinwalker when Maddie saved her resulting in getting bit. “MADDIE!” they all shouted. They hurried to get on the train. Quickly they bandaged up the bite. The next night, they were about a 100 miles away from home when they discovered the horrible truth…Maddie was a skinwalker. It was horribly helpful. They could use her blood the blood of a skinwalker (WV 044837) to cure other skinwalkers….yet you cannot save yourself…Maddie was stuck like that…forever.

The last few moments of the train ride were agonizing…until a skinwalker jumped on top of the train and started attacking. Tiffany quickly grabbed the gun. “SHOOT HIM!” Ashley and Rosie yelled together. Maddie was holding him off as long as possible. “Why are you doing this? You’re not human anymore. Humans are evil. We are good” he bent down. “Four legs are good…two legs are evil…” he continued running toward her. “I’m not one of you…And YOU’RE evil!” she replied. “SHOOT!” Rosie said. “Okay…” Tiffany said pulling the trigger. The bullet barely missed Maddie, but she shot the skinwalker in the chest. Rosie stayed there in that town, but the girls continued home.

They slayed as many skinwalkers and blood stealers as they could before they ran out of weapons. They then decided to make peace. The skinwalkers and blood stealers promised they would only kill for protection, and on this day, if you go to Whitechapel, you couldn’t tell the difference between the blood stealers, skinwalkers, and humans….well unless you got in their way…..
 * The End**

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 * Describe the start of your story. || * Introduce your characters: Tiffany, Rosie, Maddie, and Ashley.
 * What do they want? Their little town of Whitechapel, Oregon is being taking over by mysterious creatures that people describe as skinwalkers (werewolves) and blood stealers (vampires) and they plan on stopping the invasion.
 * Where are they going? They travel to Transylvan
 * Is your ending what your readers are expecting? They will be expecting everything to go back to normal....but they are wrong.
 * Have you used foreshadowing throughout your story? Yes.....I will explain what happens when the werewolves or vampires take over Whitechapel.
 * ia with Tiffany's family in search for repellents and cures. ||
 * What happens in the middle of your story? || * How will all your story and characters develop? At the beginning, Rosie and Ashley can't stand each other (for popularity reasons,) but they soon discover who you can trust when there is no one else to turn to.
 * Plot Twists and Turns? Halfway through the story Maddie gets scratched by a werewolf when trying to defend her family.
 * How will you lead up to the climax? On the train to Transylvania Maddie helps them find what cures they need like chemical WV-46553 (the blood of werewolf), and repellents like silver and holy water. ||
 * Outline the climax...How does the story end? ||  ||