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There was once a hero named John C. Gonzalez was the biggest hero in Popcornia. He ceased all of Popcornia’s lost ancient artifacts but one, The Golden Kernel. The king who fooled the people of Popcornia to make him king used their stupidity against them. He also wanted the artifact.

The Golden Kernel By Timmy Branam



There was once a hero named John C. Gonzalez, he was the biggest hero in Popcornia. He ceased all of Popcornia’s lost ancient artifacts but one, The Golden Kernel. It was said to be in the ancient Heat Valley. The king, who fooled the people of Popcornia to make him king, used their stupidity against them. The hero, John C. Gonzalez, was never fooled by his devious plan, in fact his brain power was more powerful than the king’s. When the king realized there was an artifact missing he then collaborated on how to get it. He then realized that John C. Gonzalez had found that artifact he could just steal it. He then would become the hero and fool the entire city.

When the hero suited up for the extreme heat in Heat Valley he went to say his fair wells and went off, not knowing when or if he would come back. The king and his servants followed not too far behind. It took seven hours until they reached Heat Valley. When John C. Gonzalez reach the treturase heat valley he decided to make camp for the night, but during that night the two servants snuck in John C. Gonzalez’s back then took half of his supplies for the king. When he woke up he noticed something shining out of the grainy sand. It was a sword, a peculiar one at that. He decided he was going to need it later on.

It was now time for the hero to go in the valley. As the king was sleeping, John C. Gonzalez went in the valley to search for the Golden Kernel. He then was interrupted by a rumbling sound coming from a distance when it got closer he could make out a large figure running towards him. The rumbling eventually woke the king and he then quickly packed up and ran like a coward with his servants. Then John C. Gonzalez could tell what it was as it got closer, it was a tri clops that had been woken up. He was ready to attack so John C. Gonzalez thought it was a good time to use his new sword, but when he grabbed it started glowing and when the tri clops got to him it tried to stomp on him but when John C. Gonzalez jumped he practically flew one hundred feet in the air, which was the tri clop’s height. Then while he was falling he ripped throw him like cutting butter in half. He never had done it so he was very impressed, and so was the king.

So as the impressive encounter he was eager to find out what else the sword could do and so was the king as they followed him to the Cave of Gold. Which the Golden Kernel was told to be hidden. There is also seed to be a guilded dragon of magical powers but as usually but the king was even more scared then usual. The cave split into two the hero went left and the king went right. The king then found fifty-five Hobbs. The king showed them his wits and tried to overpower them like he did with the people of Popcornia. When he succeeded he slaved them to kill John C. Gonzalez. They followed because of their lack of brains.

Once the Hobbs found John C. Gonzalez they waited just sitting there for the perfect moment. Then John C. Gonzalez was attacked by the Hobbs. As he was fighting them off the Golden Dragon appeared out of nowhere an ate the Hobbs, as it came for John C. Gonzalez for his next meal but before it had the chance the hero dodged its jaws and out smarted it by making him tie himself in a knot so he choked himself to death. Then when the king fled the scene he saw the Golden Kernel but from out of nowhere a Cyclops appeared and tried to protect the Golden Kernel. So he took the only way he grabbed the king and was about to eat him until John C. Gonzalez came and saved the king, but while he did that he was grabbed and the Cyclops ate him whole then when he went for the king he froze, sitting there he fell to the ground dead as a stone since the king secretly dipped his sword in poison. Once the king left with the Golden Kernel the city staid enslaved by the king. The End

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The Golden Kernel Heat Valley ||
 * Describe the start of your story. || * Introduce your character
 * John C. Gonzalez
 * What do they want
 * Where are they going?
 * What happens in the middle of your story? || * How will all your story and characters develop?

new powers and death
 * Plot Twists and Turns?
 * death


 * How will you lead up to the climax?
 * traveling and challenges on the way ||
 * Outline the climax...How does the story end? || * Is your ending what your readers are expecting?
 * no


 * Have you used foreshadowing throughout your story
 * maybe ||