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Super Bully By: Jathan Moreno

I was sitting in my seat; I felt something that was cold and wet that had just hit me in the back of the neck so I grabbed it. At first I didn’t know what it was until I looked at it pretty good, it turned out to be a spit wad that came from the biggest bully in the school, Zach. There were only 2 types of people in my school, Bullies and Geeks; obviously I was considered a geek. My name is Max, I have no friends and I am 12 years old I live in a town called Normal, if you’re wondering where Normal is, it’s in Illinois. These bullies Zach and his friends, Susan, Mollie, and Megan took a kids lunch money and threw him in his locker, I wanted to help him but I knew I would get my butt kicked too.

Zach bullied me every day; he would give me wet willies, atomic wedgies, he would get me in trouble from the teacher, he always called me Maxie, and he always took my lunch money. I hated him but I could do nothing about it, I have tried telling teachers before but he gets me back afterwards. I tried to walk away but he would just follow me, and acting unafraid does nothing he just laughs and hits me again. Whatever the teachers tell you about stopping bullying doesn’t work at all, trust me I tried everything. I just didn’t know what to do, I wished I could get rid of Zach.

I figured out that today would be the best day of my life, my class went to a space museum which wasn’t the best part of my day we seen an awesome moon rock. There was a security guard watching it, this kid’s mom asked him if she could touch it, and of course being that she is a pretty woman he lets her. 10 minutes later it got stolen nobody knew who stole it, neither did I till after school when I was walking home I seen Zach sitting in a bush holding the moon rock, now I wasn’t going to say anything because I didn’t want to get killed. I came home that evening and my mom and dad said we were moving to Pittsburgh. So what I did was I told the cops right there and then I left to Pittsburgh and when I was leaving I seen Zach getting arrested, of course for stealing the moon rock.

25 years later I moved back to Normal on the account of teaching an English class at my old school. I felt great to be in my old school and not be bullied. I spent some time in that school teaching and gaining relationships with the teachers. But one thing I knew is that pretty much every teacher in that school smokes. Every time I went in that teachers’ lounge I felt like I was going to hack my lungs out. After class, Zach the Honors Math teacher asked if I wanted to go to the school dance so I said sure. When I was there I was talking with the Sex-Ed teacher when Zach bumped in to me and I knocked her drink out of her hand and it got all over her dress, I felt bad I think she thought I did it on purpose.

After that I noticed that when I was talking to Zach that he had this long canine tooth. I just knew that it was my bully right then and there from 7th grade, because he had the same exact tooth, they use to call him fang. I tensed up like a cat and left, He had just looked at me very unorthodoxly. When period 5 was over I got a cup of coffee and I had to go to the bathroom, when I seen Black stuff all over my cheeks in the mirror, I just knew that was the start of him knowing I was back. He just kept pulling pranks and pranks and more pranks, so I tried to tell the principal but he didn’t believe me, so I stood up for myself.

I told him we have to talk, and I asked him why he was still trying to bully me. Zach said “c’mon I was just playing” I said, “really?” Zach, “well maybe I was being a little too rough but it’s been a long time since I have had fun”. Me, “that’s not a real answer, and If you don’t stop I’m going to start defending myself” Zach, “ you’re never going to get the guts to do that, you never had the guts to ever stick up for yourself” Me “I was the one who told on you about stealing the moon rock”. He had the evilest look on his face.

He ran after me so I ran in the school and hid in the study hall room,he found me so I ran in the gym and climbed up the climbing rope. I thought I lost him but he lit the rope on fire, I didn’t know what to do so I climbed up further and out of the window. I tried to run back to my house but he was already there, I dashed in the woods and didn’t stop running till I found a waterfall with a big log going across to the other side. I thought I might as well because he is gonna catch me anyway so I got about halfway and he was already there. He started walking slowly towards me, I got tired of running so I picked up a stick. Zach, “I thought we were friends” Me, “You were never my friend, friends don’t be mean to each other all the time friends are someone to help and guide you” Zach, “then you’re the best friend I ever had”. Then he tried to grab me so I hit him with the stick and he fell of the log and went plummeting to his death.

I killed him, I said goodbye there was no need to run, the police would have found me soon enough so I went to the police station and I was going to turn myself in. Till I seen my friend randy and I told him to take me to jail but he wouldn’t do it he said go home, he will take care of the evidence. I said okay and went to bed when I was at school I had seen Zach again and wondered how he didn’t die he said he just made it. THE END

Dean Groom Activity # 2 The small headed second wife of Mr. A, had just finished brushing her teeth, when Mr. A walked into the tooth brush room, which had just been built by Mr. A. filed into the barn, cheeping feebly and wandering from side to side to find some place where they would not be trodden on. Clover made a sort of wall round them with her great foreleg, and the ducklings nestled down inside it and promptly fell asleep. At the last moment Mollie, the foolish, pretty white mare who drew Mr. Jones's trap, came mincing daintily in, chewing at a lump of sugar.

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MIDDLE _ BEGINNING _ END Work Sheet


 * Describe the start of your story. || * Introduce your characters:Zach and Max


 * What do they want?Zach is a bully and wants to bully Max


 * Where are they going?there hometown ||
 * What happens in the middle of your story? || * How will all your story and characters develop? By them changing from not knowing each other to knowing each other.


 * Plot Twists and Turns? yes


 * How will you lead up to the climax? ||
 * Outline the climax...How does the story end? || * Is your ending what your readers are expecting?Probably


 * Have you used foreshadowing throughout your story: i think so ||