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My mini-saga   "Later when he had many followers,they fought there way into the kingdom and got to the kings chambers. once they got there they killed him in his sleep. Just as they killed him the guards burst into the room and found the king dead. inraged they fought the rebels" Apocalypse by  Andrew Cantley  The air was full of ash. Everything was destroyed. Fire was burning throughout the city, and all that was left of the building were piles of rubble. “This is horrible” Steve thought to himself as he crawled out of the rubble of one building. Miraculously he had survived what ever had happened to this town. “How could this have happened?” he thought to himself. He looked around the town but could not find anything but destruction. “I must get out of here and see if anyone else survived”, he said to himself. He slowly began to limp out of the city. He traveled for weeks but all the cities he came to he only found destruction. He began to think he was the only one left when one day he stumbled into a town. Just as he began to leave he saw a man come up to him the man welcomed him and took him to a group of small poorly made homes that looked almost like huts. When he got there he was so relieved he had found some sort of civilization.

Years have passed since then and the group of huts slowly became a city. "Everyone was happy Nobody stole, nobody grumbled over his rations, the quarreling and jealousy which had been normal features of life in the old days had almost disappeared." that is until Steve became leader. Steve began to believe they were becoming too much like they once were and if they continued to act this way they would have another apocalypse. At first this was ok by the people.They all thought a non-violent community sounded pretty good to them. Then after a few rules he made new laws banning culture, art, and music. Soon most people forgot everything about life before when the new laws and those who did remember them and spoke of them in public were killed. Then later He banished color because he said it had to much to do with art From then on everything was to be gray and all the citizens where forced to wear gray uniforms. Soon Steve became power craze making the people his personal slaves. The people did not know anything else so no one rebelled and those who did where quickly killed by Steve’s guards. Then one day 15 years later a young man named Will discovered something that would change there life forever……….

One day a young boy named Will was wondering around the city when he came to the edge of the city. He knew leaving the city was punishable by law and that they would kill him if he got caught but he did not care. He needed to leave this horrible city for awhile and think. Usually when he left the city he stayed on an old path but today while deep in thought he wandered of course. Then suddenly he looked up to see a giant old rusty metal building. ”What is it?” Will asked himself. He knew he should probably stay away but then curiosity got the better of him and he walked in to the building. When he got inside he was amazed at all the strange things in the building. There were all different colors on the walls and he could hear music coming from another room he could not believe it what he was seeing and hearing. People had not seen this kind of stuff in years and yet here it was all in front of him.

When he got home he told his mother what he had seen. ”Don’t talk such rubbish” she said in a stern tone, but will could tell she was hiding something from him so he went to his father. When he told his father his father told him that before the rule of Steve T. Walker the whole city was like this building. Everyone was allowed to do as they pleased and people use to sing and laugh without having to worry about getting attacked by the guards. When his father finished telling Will he told him to tell know one what he had found, but that did not stop him from going to the old building every day and admiring the amazing things inside. One day he was walking back from the old building when he thought to himself that the whole city should be like this then he thought off what his father said about the king. He suddenly realized that if the king were gone then they would have their freedom.

Many years passed and Will had managed to show people the old rusty building and have them help him with his cause. Later when he had many followers,they fought there way into the kingdom and got to the kings chambers. once they got there they killed him in his sleep. Just as they killed him the guards burst into the room and found the king dead. inraged they fought the rebels and killed many of them before the rebels defeated them. They looked for there leader Will but when they finally found him he was dead. The rebellion still went on thought and people became free to do as they pleased and once again you could hear music in the streets.

Weeks passed by and the revolution was over and all was well. Then one day the people decided they needed a new leader so had a vote, but of course they all voted on them self’s. This caused them to begin to argue. Most of them went from arguing to fighting and most were dead when the fight ended. Those who survived had no laws and most killed each other out of greed. Then the human race became extinct killing each other for power and wealth. The human race could have continued but they destroyed them selves out of greed and hatred. The End.   STORY IN A WEEK Tales of Utopia

<span style="background-color: #ffffff; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">MIDDLE _ BEGINNING _ END Work Sheet


 * <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Describe the start of your story. || * <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Introduce your characters: <span class="given-name" style="background-color: #ffffff; font-family: Tahoma,'Lucida Grande','Trebuchet MS',Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif;">William <span class="family-name" style="background-color: #ffffff; font-family: Tahoma,'Lucida Grande','Trebuchet MS',Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif;">Guillory (24 years old) <span style="color: #464646; font-family: Tahoma,'Lucida Grande','Trebuchet MS',Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif;">, <span style="color: #000000; font-family: Tahoma,'Lucida Grande','Trebuchet MS',Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif;"> Steve T.  <span style="color: #000000; font-family: Tahoma,'Lucida Grande','Trebuchet MS',Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif;">Walker <span style="color: #464646; font-family: Tahoma,'Lucida Grande','Trebuchet MS',Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif;"> (48 years old) Steve has survived the Apocalypse and thinks he is the only one left    <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #464646; font-family: Tahoma,'Lucida Grande','Trebuchet MS',Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif;"> on earth.
 * <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">What do they want? survive and keep the human race alive.
 * <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Where are they going?This is unknown at this time. ||
 * <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">What happens in the middle of your story? || * <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">How will all your story and characters develop? They will find more survivors(including Will )and start to make a perfect society without violence or destruction. Steve Walker will be the leader of this Utopia and try to make sure the other humans forget of how earth was before the <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Apocalypse.
 * <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Plot Twists and Turns?Steve Walker becomes to power craze and bans almost anything other than work. Treats all as slaves to him
 * <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">How will you lead up to the climax?One man finds out about the past and figures out about music and art and democracy this leads him to start a rebelliousness. ||
 * <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Outline the climax...How does the story end? || * <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Is your ending what your readers are expecting?No alll the Humans kill each other ending the human race out of selfishness
 * <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Have you used foreshadowing throughout your story? Partly but still the ending is unexpected. ||