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My Mini-Saga James was arguing with someone trough his wrist-com and he was trying to ge t away from the fight. When he sat down in his chair, Diamond walked over and started to think of a way to distract the fighters but James was warned, that he was being plotted against and hunted.

__**Cosmo Strike: Insanity**__ By: Tyrel Kallstrom



The planet James McClue and his team had defended for many years dropped into anarchy and chaos. The once clean and working city and capitol of the planet was now an insane asylum with no walls. James McClue was walking into the bridge of his team’s massive warship, Kahless, and the message light was blinking on the arm of his chair. He pressed the button near the light and the main screen flashed to life. “James, I am calling for a very important reason. I have a job for you. Report to the only semi-sane building on the planet. I’ll brief you on the details when you arrive.” General Johnson, head of the Cornerian army, said in a serious tone. “I’ll be there ASAP General.” The humanoid fox said, “All members of Cosmo Strike, report to the bridge." The entire team walked in almost simultaneously starting with Diamond, the only female on the team and was a white furred fox, Avian Star was the blue feathered falcon, and Jason Ray was the green toad with bulgy eyes and a tan chin. “Okay, we’re all here, I was in the middle of my favorite game. What’s with the bridge call?” Avian asked in his usual cocky tone. “The general called and we’ve got ourselves a mission. He didn’t give me the details but he said it was top importance.” James replied with his hands on his hips. “Oh well, a mission’s a mission. We need to fix the ship.” Jason said. “You are being plotted against and hunted… I was paid a double what your dear old general promised…” James communicator burst without receiving a message. “Maybe we shouldn’t do this. I don’t like the sounds of that even though it probably was a malfunction…” Diamond said with her tail flicking. “Noted, but we need the money. Jason, head for Corneria, full speed!” James countered. It took an hour to find the general’s office but it indeed was the only semi-sane building on Corneria. The team walked into the office and behind the door was and old brown dog with a square snout. "Cosmo Strike,” the general said as everyone was sat down, “ as you know our planet is going into the seventh ring of insanity. I'm paying you a lot of money to be my police and get our planet back under military control. Spread a good word in my name and whoever plots against me, deal with them appropriately. I don't want to be labeled as a killer." the general said. "Exactly how much money are we talkin'?” Avian asked, “Fifty thousand credits? One hundred thousand?" "I'll pay you forty thousand for a good job. Half that if you barely get the job done." General Johnson said irritably.

“We need to come up with some slogans like ‘General Morgan started this, General Johnson will finish this” James suggested. For months on end the Cosmo Strike team was a propaganda team hanging posters that said, ‘General Morgan started this age of insanity, General Johnson will finish it.’ and ‘Johnson will work so you don’t have to’ and finally for the winner was ‘Johnson is always right!’ They also served as the entire planet’s police force until they got enough people to support Corneria city’s police force. (A month later) “Diamond, weld those two beams together.” James said as he was lifting a pile of bricks. The planet was slowly pulling out of anarchy and was trying to rebuild some damaged buildings all because they thought the last general messed their planet up and a couple of propaganda posters changed their minds about having a leader. They were all united as one planet. Pretty soon they had a second leader named Raymond Colby. They worked together pretty well until they started to build a power plant. Either one of the two generals wanted credit for the idea but only one of them could have it. All night if you lived near their meeting house you would here insults and reasons flying from one dog to another. Then came time to vote for a general.

“I brought you out of anarchy and remade civilization and I have improved your lives! Think about that when you vote.” General Johnson’s speech said. Then it was General Raymond’s turn and he stepped up on the pedestal.

<span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;">“Your first general after the anarchy ages was not a very honest one to get there. This man took the General position by force and he grabbed and clawed at all costs. Think about that when you go to elect." the competitor stated smugly.

<span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;">(In General Johnson's office.)

"Nobody knows my secret except all of you... one of you leaked information to my competitor! Now who was it?!” the general roared. “Because of one of you I may lose this election and everything I have worked for will be ruined!!!!!” Avian was the only one with a smile on his face for his plan was working perfectly.

“AVIAN! Why did you sabotage the election?!” James yelled punching a hole in the wall.

“Avian, I hate to do this, but a have to banish you from this planet. Do not return to this planet ever again!” Johnson said.

(a few months later) James woke to a massive explosion that was the power plant. When everyone was there, the elected General Johnson claimed it was Avian Star, an enemy of the planet. All of a sudden, the captain of the Cosmo Strike team was arguing through his communicator and was trying to get out of it. Diamond walked over to distract the two and James received this warning: “You are being plotted against and hunted.”

“Ok, everyone, this is a warning! Do not make contact with Avian Star or you will be punished!" General Johnson said.

Another couple of months passed and there was another explosion and out of the smoke a form appeared and said, "I didn't think that Johnson or his competitor deser ved to rule. I didn't like the whole idea of anyone ruling except for me and besides, I was paid double of what your dear general promised to do all this. But hey, we're mercenaries aren't we?" The mysterious figure was none other than the blue feathered falcon, Avian Star. The End

<span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">"Cosmo Strike, as you know our planet is going into the seventh ring of insanity. I'm paying you a lot of money to be my police and get our planet back under military control. Spread a good word in my name and whoever plots against me, deal with them appropriately. I don't want to be labeled as a killer." the general said. "Exactly how much money are we talkin'? Fifty thousand credits? One hundred thousand?" Avian but in. "I'll pay you forty thousand for a good job. Half that if you barely get the job done." || * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Introduce your characters:James McClue, Avian Star, Jason Ray, and Diamond are the mercs. Cosmo Strike, and General Johnson the employer. <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">"This man took the General position by force and he grabbed and clawed at all costs. Think about that when you go to elect." the competitor stated smugly. (In General Johnson's office.) "Nobody knows my secret except one of you... One of you leeked information to my competitor. Now who was it?" || * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">How will all your story and characters develop? Characters will show their true colors <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">A mysterious figure formed in the smoke and said, "I didn't think that Johnson or his competitor deser ved to rule. I didn't like the whole idea of anyone ruling except for me and besides, I was paid double of what your dear general promised to do all this. But hey, we're mercenaries aren't we?" || * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Is your ending what your readers are expecting? Probably not.
 * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Describe the start of your story.
 * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">What do they want? They want the chaos of their planet (Cornerea) to work in harmony.
 * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Where are they going? ||
 * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">What happens in the middle of your story?
 * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Plot Twists and Turns? Someone is exiled
 * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">How will you lead up to the climax? Problems that make the anarchy worse and someone comes in to the picture. ||
 * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Outline the climax...How does the story end?
 * <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Have you used foreshadowing throughout your story? ||

<span style="display: block; font-family: 'comic sans ms',cursive; font-size: 22px; text-align: center;">STORY IN A WEEK Tales of Utopia Dean Groom activity #2 Diamond had just finished her morning duties on the bridge when James walked in from the lab, which was remodeled and redesigned, and sat in his chair, talking stubbornly into his wrist com and looking for an excuse to end his apparent argument because it was not getting him anywhere fast. Diamond walked up to James's chair and pulled a few wires from the manual steering column and James quickly ended the transmission and promptly started to repair the damaged column. Then, Jason walked in with a broken electric welder and was tinkering with it but he was the one who walked right in to an enemy trap.